September 26th, 2010 at 10:06pm
OMG,this story really is amazing=O=D
And well,you got that right,chaps 14-15 WERE a bit spooky,I'm actually still shivering right now(but let's keep that between us!=\=$LOL)-hey,it's not my fault you got such a talent in making it feel so real!=PAnywayz,just wanted to let you know you've done a wonderful job so far,the plot is REALLY good,always keeping you on the edge of your seat,the characters have unique,complicated(in a good way)personalities,which + their not so happy backgrounds make them look like they're ALIVE,helping you understand and even find a little peice of you in them,'cause,let's face it,this world wasn't made of sugar and I highly doubt anyone of us has lived the perfect life.=\
To sum up,I really wish you'll keep on updating=),and let me take a wild guess,could the unknown person by any chance be the vampire who raped Cassiel..?
Anywayz,back to business..
In these last 3 chapters,you ROCK!=D
First of all,the situation was getting really complicated,so I think it WAS neccessary for Shane and Colton to know the whole truth about Cassiel's past,and who would be better to explain than Cassie herself?Plus it was touching in a heartbreaking way to hear her reliving all those things that marked her forever,'cause they might be horrible,but they're the reason why she's such a compassionate,good-hearted person.She knows what it feels like to have nothing,and so now,even though she's kind of being held prisoner by her "position" and duties,she does whatever she can to prevent others to go through what she has.I really admire her you know,for she's one of those few who have an open mind and care for people without expecting sth back.So good call=)Secondly, the"Death Eyes"?
Freakin awesome idea!=DSeriously,it gave me goosebumps,lol!The whole thing about demons recognising the souls that are about to be claimed from death was just a peice of art=)
And thirdly,CONGRATS once again for coming up with the idea of Cassie finally deciding to look for her lost brother=)It's sad that things had to come to this point though,her fearing she will die and worrying who would take her place,but I'm all excited about this new adventure.I think it's gonna be really interesting,especially getting the chance to see how Zach,Shane and Colton are going to get along with no one except her around..Oh,I have sth to expect in my life now,lol!=P
I mean,seriously,
you keep on improving,I'm amazed=)