For starters, before I start reading this, I'm not too fond of backgrounds that repeat but don't connect into one big picture. That's just me. Anyways, onto reading the story.
That was sweet and adorable. I love the way you went from her point of view to his, the changing of text colors. That was a good idea. Instead of writing so-and-so's point of view every time you changed point of views. My favorite part would most definitely have to be the end. Makes me want a reunion. Maybe years later or something along those lines. Once again you did a great job at writing an epic piece and I applaud you for that.
I started reading this and was hooked. I love how this was extremely descriptive. By the way, keep in mind of the point if view change, it could confuse a reader, but over all this is amazing. I couldn't keep my eyes off it. Too bad this is a one-shot.
That was sweet and adorable. I love the way you went from her point of view to his, the changing of text colors. That was a good idea. Instead of writing so-and-so's point of view every time you changed point of views. My favorite part would most definitely have to be the end. Makes me want a reunion. Maybe years later or something along those lines. Once again you did a great job at writing an epic piece and I applaud you for that.