Superb. ;) The intensity of this story struck me. You managed to connect the plot to the song expertly, and the words flowed freely down the page. I loved the way you conveyed the protagonist's emotions of rage and hatred. The part where he murders his wife was so intense and descriptive, it was almost real. I could feel the blood bleeding off of the page.
Amazing job and well done. :) I whole-heartedly enjoyed reading this.
One thing, please provide a link to the contest in your summary area. :)
Thank you!
Contest results will be posted on my profile as well as the forum soon after the due date.
The intensity of this story struck me.
You managed to connect the plot to the song expertly, and the words flowed freely down the page.
I loved the way you conveyed the protagonist's emotions of rage and hatred.
The part where he murders his wife was so intense and descriptive, it was almost real.
I could feel the blood bleeding off of the page.
Amazing job and well done. :)
I whole-heartedly enjoyed reading this.
One thing,
please provide a link to the contest in your summary area. :)
Thank you!
Contest results will be posted on my profile as well as the forum soon after the due date.