Naturally Freaky - Comments

@ fat lamb
I loved AHS: Freakshow! I will probably be drawing some inspiration from it as I continue this towards the freakshow scene. And I think I see a bit of myself in Pete. Mostly his sarcasm and good nature. :)

I am so curious about Madame Ilise and what sets her apart from Claude. A few months back I started watching American Horror Story: Freakshow, so I'm surprised at how much the visuals affect me now when I just reread this.Which "freak" do you feel like you relate to the most?

So I've only read one chapter so far, but I can tell that this'll be my favorite story here. I love the banner, the layout - everything about it is so colorful! I really love it.
Like Bittersweet Kiss said, alot of things made me laugh. I will definately be subbing and commenting more when I can :D <3
Great job!

Nonesense, this chapter was wonderful! Probably my favorite. It didn't suck at all. And I really liked how you ended it with the "naturally freaky" part. And there are so many little things that make me laugh in this chapter. Especially these two parts:

"Long time, no see," he said, pulling Lola, the Gorgon woman, into a loving hug. She kissed his cheek, and the bluish snake-like tentacles that grew from her scalp copied her as usual, pecking away amiably at Gallant's face.

"Time flies," Gallant said. "Creeping up on the old triple digits, huh?"

Growling, Pete corrected him, "I'll be sixty-four in a month or so. How 'bout you, kiddo? Creepin' up on puberty?"

This one is my favorite. I like it a lot. It's really interesting.You should continue it.

I really like this story. And the layout. I like balloons.