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  • Neon_Skies_Killjoy

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    Update!!!!!!!!!!!
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    September 3rd, 2011 at 08:32pm
  • Thats Not My Name

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    YAY!!! Another update!
    It's sad it's been so long because this is such an awesome story! Thank you for updating; this is my favourite current story on Mibba.
    It’s a great chapter and I can't wait for the next to find out about the adoption records.
    September 2nd, 2011 at 02:06pm
  • RebelliousLaurel

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    I really enjoy this story. I like how you manage to tantalize us while revealing new aspects of characters. At the same time, I do wish you had more time to update. I've been following this story for a long time and I really want to see it to its conclusion. One last suggestion before I sign off and hope against hope for another update, I would like to see a deeper side to Alistair. I know that he misses her, but I think it would be beneficial to show that more in conjunction with his now horrible demeanor. Anyway, yeah please update as soon as you can. Thanks!
    September 2nd, 2011 at 07:27am
  • Neon_Skies_Killjoy

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    :0 I love this...
    U no update for while.
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    August 3rd, 2011 at 09:44pm
  • Thats Not My Name

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    Great chapter!
    I don't like Cynda "The Thing" or Xavier either. Damn them both to the fiery pits of hell to burn for eternity where they belong is right!
    Poor Elizabeth/Michelle! At least she has Nicole and Christian. And I also think the "Dog" is on her side too.
    Can't wait for the next chapter!
    April 19th, 2011 at 12:48pm
  • A Heart Black n Blue

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    .......heheheheheHEHEHEHEHEEHAHAHAHAHA!!!*supposedly evil laughter*I'm sorry but..is it so wrong that I'm just a bit satisfied that Alistair's gonna suffer a little?=D He deserves it for causing so much pain to Michelle!I'm still kinda pitying him though..And about that Cynda character...I think Cynda will be the new word for sl*t very soon lol.Anyways..MUCH LOVE for Alistair's parents, they're so good!

    fav parts:

    --The first one was just her. The unnamed artist painted her perfectly; her dark hair framed beautiful her face. Her green eyes burned just as bright and lively as the day I first saw her. Her cheeks were lightly tinted with pink which contrasted against her soft ivory skin tone. Her smile was blinding, causing my heart to clench. She was only five years old when that picture was painted.
    The second one was of both of us, in her garden. It was painted like all the rest of them, yet this one was more special. It was painted by Nicole and Christian’s mother a few months before she died. It was the last picture she painted and was the last one of Michelle and her garden before they were both destroyed by the unforgiving flames.
    She was wearing her favorite dress. The lace was as white as the snow surrounding us and the long sleeves were draped gracefully on her slender arms. The skirt of the dress fluttered slightly in the wind, her dark hair was pulled back into a diamond in crested clip, exposing her angelic face. Her green eyes were locked on mine in the picture, as mine were on hers.-- I LOVE THIS and I don't even know why lol.It feels so much like it's taken from a published novel!

    --I felt my anger threatening to boil over, “So what your saying is I have to find someone, that I don’t like, who isn’t Michelle and marry her?”--
    Michelle is right next to you, stupid fang boy lol

    --Damn you Xavier. Damn you to the fiery pits of hell to burn for eternity where you belong.--
    I'M WITH YOU!LET'S GO TIE HIM UP AND FEED HIM TO THE DOGS!XD

    --“You didn’t tell me you were abused,” I frowned. “Or that your dad was an alcoholic.”
    She didn’t look at me, like she did want to admit it.
    “Why are you giving him money, when all he did was hurt you?” I tried to understand, but I couldn’t wrap my head around it.
    “I-I lo-love hi-him,” her breath came out in short, shallow gasps.
    Just like Michelle, she loved the people who hated her.--
    That was painfully beautiful T^T
    April 16th, 2011 at 10:16am
  • Thats Not My Name

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    Brilliant chapter, I love it so much!
    Can't wait till the next one =D
    April 9th, 2011 at 05:00pm
  • Thats Not My Name

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    Awesome chapter!
    I love this story and I can't wait till the next update to see what happens
    March 21st, 2011 at 08:43am
  • MatchStick

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    :) OMG love love love love! pleeeeaseee update :) real soon!
    March 20th, 2011 at 12:32am
  • A Heart Black n Blue

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    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*trying to breathe*I'm sorry lol..but..the translator you used for Greek got almost everything wrong lmao..The problem is it didn't translate the phrases, but only the words separately, so the whole meaning is entirely different from what you were trying to say..I'm sorry but it was so funny XD
    I'm not trying to offend you or anything, just saying..I'll help you fix it though ^ ^
    (You speak Greek?)"Μιλάς Ελληνικά"?
    (What's your name?I'm Elizabeth)"Πώς σε λένε?Είμαι η Ελίζαμπεθ"
    (Let me help you)"Άσε με να σε βοηθήσω"
    (You'll get used to it)"Θα το συνιθήσεις"
    (How did you survive?)"Πώς επιβίωσες?"
    (The werewolf?)"Ο λυκάνθρωπος?"
    (Oh, what about him?)"Α, τι μ'αυτόν?"
    (It was supposed to kill you)"Υποτίθεται ότι θα σε σκότωνε"
    (Oh)"Α"
    (So how did you do it?)"Λοιπόν πώς τα κατάφερες?"
    (Bye Hara)"Αντίο Χαρά"(Γεια means hi, not bye lol)
    BUT OTHER THAN THAT, THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH FOR DEDICATING THIS CHAP TO ME =D=D=D=D=D It was so sweet of you..and I was REALLY excited to read about Hara(wow, it feels so weird to see my name typed in your work lol), I'd been looking forward to it a long time,and OF COURSE you didn't disappoint me ^ ^ It's sad how no one really knew her though, and how she shrunk with fear each time someone approached her..=(
    Nicole is a sweetheart as well, but I don't get it, how does she treat the slaves?She seemed a bit cold towards them
    AND OF COURSE, leave it to Michelle to worry about the well being of her abusive stepfather while they inform her she's going to be a slave lol -.-'' this girl is really something else!
    AND DAN DAN DANDAN!!!!Evil Allistair comes out of his cave and meets the "pathetic human girl" lol!Things look like fun so far!XD Can't wait for what's next!
    March 19th, 2011 at 07:02pm
  • MidnightMask

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    I'm really enjoying this story please continue :)
    March 19th, 2011 at 02:48pm
  • Cacow :D

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    Oh dearie me, I seem to have exhausted all of the chapters present...So, Update soon please?
    March 19th, 2011 at 01:13pm
  • Cacow :D

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    I love this story. It's amazing. It's heart-wrenchingly sad but I feel connected to the characters and therefore feel sorry for them. Your writing style is really nice, kind of flowery, and it goes very well with the piece. I would however say that there are some grammatical and spelling errors. These however don't take away from the story and it's effectiveness, so good job, keep it up.
    March 19th, 2011 at 12:53pm
  • A Heart Black n Blue

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    I just LOVE this story!!!=D=D=D
    The whole thing is sooo sad,how Alistair was happy but then he froze inside because of michele's suppossed death..
    You know I love drama and this is so well-planed out!
    The characters, the plot so far,everything.
    I'm oddly very fond of the werewolf, even though we haven't really met him properly,and michelle-or maybe I should call her elizabeth?=\-is such a sweetheart!
    It's truly amazing how she always seems to find beauty in even the smallest things..and kind of breaks my heart, how she's completely unable to hate anyone, no matter how awful they treat her.Alistair's being an a*shole,but I can't bring myself to dislike him when
    I know what he's been through,and how painful it must be for him to be looked by eyes so kind and similar to his lost soulmate..T^T
    Anyhow,
    I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapters,can't wait to see what'll happen now that she'll be staying with them!
    Adios=)
    February 6th, 2011 at 04:00pm
  • Thats Not My Name

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    Thank you for dedicating chapter 5 (Avenged) to me!
    I love your story, it's so awesome!
    And I can’t wait to see what happens next.
    I think the dog is going to be the werewolf that saved Michelle’s life seven years ago, but I wonder what is going to happen when they meet in the cells? =D
    November 12th, 2010 at 10:28am
  • HeartlessAngel8795

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    Keep on writing ^_^
    November 12th, 2010 at 12:51am
  • HeartlessAngel8795

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    Oh No!!! She's being thrown to the hounds or in this case, a "dog"
    November 12th, 2010 at 12:51am
  • HeartlessAngel8795

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    Thanks for dedicating a chapter to me. And thank you for updating, keep going ^_^
    November 6th, 2010 at 02:33am
  • Thats Not My Name

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    I love your story so far!
    It is very good and I can't wait to read more =D
    November 2nd, 2010 at 07:30am