Fake It for the Airwaves - Comments

  • crazy.beautiful

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    i'm hooked already....love the plot so far! and yeah, i'm a fan of the iTunes line too...made me laugh a little...more when you can?! =] please?! [suscribes!]
    December 9th, 2007 at 11:44am
  • My Chemical Romance

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    oooo I like it!!
    I cannot wait for more!

    xoxo
    Yours cruely
    -Rainbow Dark
    December 9th, 2007 at 11:44am
  • Alice Verney

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    awwwwwwwww poor quinn
    December 9th, 2007 at 08:31am
  • WayMCR

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    yay!! the good guy has a thing for the bad guy :D

    im def suscribing to this.

    oh, and how a mikey-quinn would be named? Minn? Quikey? LMAO im sorry, i just have this terribe need of coming up for names for pairings -_-'

    -lupi
    Lol, maybe Quikey is good, it has a nice sound to it. <3
    December 9th, 2007 at 04:39am
  • lups

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    yay!! the good guy has a thing for the bad guy :D

    im def suscribing to this.

    oh, and how a mikey-quinn would be named? Minn? Quikey? LMAO im sorry, i just have this terribe need of coming up for names for pairings -_-'

    -lupi
    December 9th, 2007 at 04:25am
  • Captain John Hart

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    This is really good.
    I really want to know why Mikey cares so much about Quinn.
    It sounds like the both had very different upbringings and disastor(sp?) could happen but also something good could too.
    More soon please?
    *subscribes*
    December 9th, 2007 at 02:22am
  • Psycho Lunatic

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    this sounds really good and i like stories my both of u so it should be good
    More when you can plz!!!
    December 9th, 2007 at 12:22am
  • Secret Destroyers.

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    Wow, this is really good !
    I hope you update lots *shifty eyes*
    Can't wait for more!
    Really inventive storyline.
    December 8th, 2007 at 11:51pm
  • xXxlikepiXiedustxXx

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    i've got no critiques for you. i love this story, it has such an unusual plot.
    i love the reference to the iTunes playlist...so inventive!
    i subscribed i can't wait for more!
    December 8th, 2007 at 11:05pm
  • horsie890

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    Interesting plot line so far. Definitely something new (thank the lord). I like how Mikey's all angry at everything from the very beginning.

    Allman was small in size, but he had a track record longer than my iTunes playlist.

    That was brilliant, especially knowing how many songs Mikey must have on iTunes.
    XDI noticed a few things:

    {{Time Elapse}}

    People ALWAYS mess this up. "To elapse" is a verb. "Lapse," in most cases, is a noun. Most people mean to say "Time Lapse," or if you want to use the verb that badly, at least say "Time Elapses."

    Also, spell out the word "okay" without shortening it to "ok."

    Yes I'm a Grammar Nazi.

    The ending wasn't really what I expected (or Mikey being gay), but it's still a good story as of yet:}
    December 8th, 2007 at 10:29pm