Stairway to Heaven - Comments

This is beautiful. I really like Levi's personality and his attitude; it's pretty interesting to read about an angel like that. This could be turned into a full-blown chaptered story, actually. The concept was great and this is all around just an amazing story.

What the hell. Fine, I'll pop this baby's cherry.

I like it. You know I don't believe in god, so LOL I'm part of the reason why Alanis Morrissette is sorta pretty pissed. It's pretty though, in parts. I love Levi's character. He's so witty and pissy and he's entertaining. It ends short though, and I told you that, but yeah, there isn't much I can think of to do to it.