Memories Be Out All Night - Comments

  • a7xgirl6661

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    you should write a story fallowing this one like a squeal...i cried my eyes out on the whole last chapter...this is a really good story i love it alot i made my cousin read it and she cried too really good story though keep writing
    August 31st, 2010 at 02:47pm
  • xshanmarie21

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    ohmysweetjesus. what the fuck.
    i'm crying, again. my heart just broke again, reading another one of your stories.
    August 9th, 2010 at 12:51am
  • little-miss-strange

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    Sorry it took me so long to comment, dear, but... OH MY GOD.
    I can't believe it's over! And I can't believe Violet died!
    I mean, I knew something was up as soon as they got the call, but still, it's not one of those things that you want to expect.
    I really enjoyed it, though, as weird as that sounds.
    You have quite a knack for beautiful tragedy type stories, for one thing, and I freaking love how the plot ended up working so well with the lyrics of the song.
    Basically, I thought it was amazing.
    Your word choice, your descriptions, how well you portray loss and sadness... everything!
    It was hard to read, I'll admit that, cuz there are times when I get really worked up over death, but you made it seem more touching than tragic, because at least Violet got to find peace on the other side. And of course, at least Hayden got to say goodbye to her best friend.
    IDK, I'm rambling now, but the point is that it was fucking amazing.
    Can't wait to read more stories like this!
    August 8th, 2010 at 09:31am
  • stained glass eyes

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    you are EVIL! :(

    I like the plot and the story and all though. It was great. And you don't suck at first person, just saying.
    August 5th, 2010 at 06:54am
  • Talia al Ghul

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    damn you sad ending. ;_;
    i cannot believe violet died. that's crazy. poor hayden. ):
    August 3rd, 2010 at 12:41am
  • IvySaint

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    whoa! that was a shocker! sry i didn't comment sooner, i was sick 8( lolz
    August 2nd, 2010 at 07:38am
  • secrets-that-die

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    you did a great job in first person!
    i think i got a tear in my eye ha
    that was very well done <33
    August 2nd, 2010 at 01:20am
  • purplebutterfly0615

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    That's really how you end it? kill violet? really? *cries* that's sooo sad!!!
    August 2nd, 2010 at 12:26am
  • fictionsymphony

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    You did a great job at first person.
    I felt like I was about to cry as I read this though.
    Very well done.
    August 1st, 2010 at 11:52pm
  • thePHunkmaster

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    Don't say you're not good at writing in a first person pov. You wrote fine, there wasn't any confusion in the story at all.

    She died... :( That made me cry. I liked your story and I will for sure read your others.

    Oh and btw, I didn't read your story for the sex scene. I read it because I like your writing.
    August 1st, 2010 at 10:39pm
  • Jennalyn__

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    are you happy now?
    i'm in tears. and it's all your fault.
    thanks for killing me btw.
    August 1st, 2010 at 09:40pm
  • Secrets Surround Me

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    :'( Awwww it was soooo sad! Although I did crack a smile at the part about the wolves. Well done miss
    August 1st, 2010 at 07:19pm
  • Jennalyn__

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    i swear to god hannah, if i end up in the fucking hospital or dead, i'll murder you.
    July 28th, 2010 at 07:25am
  • thePHunkmaster

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    Basically, she was thinking, "EASY ACCESS!"

    They needed to have sex. The tension was pretty unbearable there.
    July 28th, 2010 at 07:22am
  • fictionsymphony

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    I'm curious about this accident.
    Update soon :)
    July 28th, 2010 at 02:17am
  • lisamargaret

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    sososo good. i wonder what kind of accident she means.
    July 27th, 2010 at 09:02pm
  • Talia al Ghul

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    awesomely sexiful chapter! XD
    cant wait to find about the accident. >.> stupid cliffhangers.
    July 27th, 2010 at 04:41pm
  • CharmingAngel

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    PERFECT.
    July 27th, 2010 at 12:30pm
  • secrets-that-die

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    More soon please!!
    I would love to get a copy of Nightmare, since i'm broke :( and yes Lets get #THEA7XNIGHTMARE a trending topic on Twitter :D
    July 27th, 2010 at 09:51am
  • nana_loves_you

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    hellz yeah man i loved there freaking music video and especially at the end when they had jimmy's drums there I think i cried but oh well I LOVE JIMMY so I can cry anywho i would love to get a copy of NIGHTMARE shit I wish i had some money because i love them and hellz yeah lets all #THEA7XNIGHTMARE on twitter im so going to!!!!!!!!!!!!! so should everyone who has twitter kay?? and i love the story hun keep up this amazing work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3
    July 27th, 2010 at 07:40am