January 24th, 2010 at 06:12am
i love the way in which you make every sentence sound special.
when i'm home alone i like to read your stories aloud.
- paradox. sceneager:
- Snow and Ice
Well, that was utterly amazing.
Not that I expected anything else from you.
Before I do anything;
I really hope you weren't looking for critique.
Cause sorry, but I've got none. Nothing. Nada.
^_^;
Firstly;
I absolutely love the idea.
Every story has Ryan being a sweet, innocent little pretty boy.
Not only is he a whore, but he's a violent one. It's a fucking wonderful enterpretation that I wouldn't in my wildest dreams have imagined.
This is well done, it's interesting, and it's fucking different.
"Which also means, fuck the kid, but don’t fuck with the kid."
Loved that line. Don't know why, but it just seems to fit Pete perfectly.
Not sure if you're a fan of 'Lock Stock and Two Smoking Barrels' and.or 'Snatch', but this had a very similar feel to those.
I adore the constant clarification that Will is, in fact, not gay.
Also, the title. Clever puns make Mikey happy.
One thing that would normally annoy me is the jumpiness, but, again, it just adds to the feel.
I will probably come back and add more to this, and I'll leave a better review on the story.
But I got like four hours sleep, then worked, and it's now almost 1 am.
D: My head is imploding. Pretty sure I'm about to drop dead.
I'm subbing :D