Hello, sorry it too so long to judge this, but I've been forgetful and whatnot. First off, the layout is cute, but the font wasn't a great choice. It doesn't look write on most computers. I: Anyway, there were a lot of errors in this. /: PM me if you have trouble finding them. Also, I found some awkward spots and at one point you switched tenses from past to present. Besides that, the idea of the story was very original and I loved the storyline. It was adorable. Great job with staying with the prompt! :D
July 31st, 2010 at 05:50am
