Every Chance You Took - Comments

Woo-Hoo a story where Burish is a good guy! I like!

you are an amazing writer :)
i feel like i keep saying the same thing for everything you write: totally amazing!

seriously, like everything you write turns into gold. I adored this<3 ( duhh.)

:)

That was the most amazing Burish oneshot ever.
You are an amazing writter, keep up the amazing work. :)

Loved it!
This story made me think of it, but I totally think Adam will be WHIPPED one day.
Would that surprise you? ahha (btw i'm duncanteeth on twitter(: )

Loved it!!! :)

You know what? I'm running out of compliments for you. :P It seems as if everything I read that is new is just even better than the last. Each time you write, you improve, which I admire and always will! :)
Now for the story itself. I absolutely loved this. It was sweet, adorable, and had Adam Burish. What else could anyone want? I thought that you tastefully wrote the sex at the end. Steamy enough for the ones that like it *cough*me*cough* but not so explicit for those who get uncomfortable. You did so well showing us Kita and her past and the way you wrote Adam's adoration for her just makes us all love her, too. I'm a sucker for proposals and lovey dovey mushy stuff, so now I'm going to go have some cute dream because I need sleep. I love yooooour writing Mrs. Eager! Me want more.

okay, first and foremost: thank you for writing this for me. you don't even know how much i appreciate it; every sentence, every word, i can't thank you enough for writing this for me and doing it so well and making it so real that i honestly felt like my heart was singing. i just feel so happy right now and you did such an amazing job with writing the four of us (oh, benny, your pouting is perfection) and it just makes me smile so big that my cheeks hurt.

i love the entire concept of this, how if it wasn't for taking chances none of us would know one another; life is like that, and you did such a good job of conveying it into the words. the doubt was there, because we all know that hockey players are not perfect and neither are we as well, but past that there's devotion to one another even though both aren't sure it exists. the adam/ben dynamic is fucking perfect, jesus christ. those two are like, soul-mates, i swear to god; you know we're going to have a hard time keeping them apart this summer. i see sleepovers and movie nights in our near future, oh yes, i do. i think my favorite part about this entire thing is just how comfortable it felt to read about adam being head-over-heels for a girl, and how well you wrote that feeling into burish-terms. yeah, he's a ladies' man, but i feel like it'd just take the right girl in the right moment in the right situation to really grab up adam's heart and make him realize that maybe life's not about the flirtations, but instead it's about building past that and having someone in your life forever rather than a night or two.

this was just so gorgeous and i swear, alyssa, even if it hadn't of had me in it, i would have loved it just as much because you write adam (and ben) so well. the moment was so real, so fantastic, and i loved every bit of it. i can't thank you enough, thank you, thank you, thank you for writing me this and making me get teary-eyed because of how happy i am that you did <3 i love you, keep being amazing, and realize that i'm so grateful for this. ;*

Awesome. Loved it.

Awe I really love this one shot. Your writing is amazing and beautiful!