I would have liked to read some sort of a short summary, even if it was just a strong sentence.
As for the actual oneshot, wasn't that guy just too blunt with the narrator? The way he talked to her even though he was drunk, sounded like they weren't even friends. The way she hung up on him and just cries is realistic, that's the way most of us would have acted in her shoes...I think.
He loved her yet he pushed her away? And there's not even an explanation on that part. Was it that he was just drunk? Was it fear on his part? Was he waiting for something from her?
This left a couple of questions on my mind and the ending seemed like it wasn't even an ending. What I mean is that it's just like reading the first chapter of a chaptered story more than a stand-alone.
Oh lordy, I think I'm about to cry. There should be another one! I want to see what she does too. Thank you for writing this, I love it. Honestly this is one of my favorite short stories. Bravo. <3
As for the actual oneshot, wasn't that guy just too blunt with the narrator? The way he talked to her even though he was drunk, sounded like they weren't even friends. The way she hung up on him and just cries is realistic, that's the way most of us would have acted in her shoes...I think.
He loved her yet he pushed her away? And there's not even an explanation on that part. Was it that he was just drunk? Was it fear on his part? Was he waiting for something from her?
This left a couple of questions on my mind and the ending seemed like it wasn't even an ending. What I mean is that it's just like reading the first chapter of a chaptered story more than a stand-alone.
~Marian.