I Think I Love You. - Comments

  • Lady.V.

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    I would have liked to read some sort of a short summary, even if it was just a strong sentence.

    As for the actual oneshot, wasn't that guy just too blunt with the narrator? The way he talked to her even though he was drunk, sounded like they weren't even friends. The way she hung up on him and just cries is realistic, that's the way most of us would have acted in her shoes...I think.

    He loved her yet he pushed her away? And there's not even an explanation on that part. Was it that he was just drunk? Was it fear on his part? Was he waiting for something from her?

    This left a couple of questions on my mind and the ending seemed like it wasn't even an ending. What I mean is that it's just like reading the first chapter of a chaptered story more than a stand-alone.

    ~Marian.
    November 23rd, 2013 at 10:27am
  • KaileyAllOver

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    I love this :]
    April 27th, 2011 at 01:28am
  • Rain On Their Parade

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    Is there more?
    I hope so.
    December 23rd, 2010 at 05:24am
  • josten.

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    Oh lordy, I think I'm about to cry.
    There should be another one! I want to see what she does too.
    Thank you for writing this, I love it.
    Honestly this is one of my favorite short stories. Bravo.
    <3
    June 17th, 2010 at 10:11pm
  • Katerina Phillips

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    Yes, pleasse do make more.
    That was so cute.
    I want to know if she stays! Great job!
    Thank you soooooooo much! You are a great writer!!!!!
    June 17th, 2010 at 06:34am
  • Robin 'The Sidekick'

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    abby this is sooo good. make more
    June 2nd, 2010 at 03:43pm