Bring It On Home To Me - Comments

Oh, and I should probably add I won't be reading the other installments. Not that I don't love how you did that, but I'm just sticking to the two you involved ATL with. Hope you can understand.

Okay, so I just sort of randomly found your stories... I read Dedication Takes A Lifetime and then since I saw you posted this, I went ahead and read it as well...
May I just say, you are a fabulous writer. I know I'm sort of late to the bandwagon but I enjoyed these two stories. I've gotten into AG fan fics lately and found this and well, I'm glad I did.
Although it was frustrating at points... like the fact that it took them so long to get together... even though from the beginning they were destined for it! Ugh, but I digress... this sequel kind of made up for it so props to that.
But I knew Alex was on her side the moment she spotted those Dunks of his in the bathroom during her nervousness... and then with the journal, I knew right away it had to be him... (I can't quite remember which happened first so I'll just say them both). They were definitely moments I enjoyed because well, they ended up being proven in an 'aha' moment at the end.
But even though I found it frustrating... when they were quarreling, there were a few moments when it was definitely entertaining. I love when stories can be spite-y. Aha.
So, yeah. Idk if you'll see this and it's kind of irrelevant now since the story is long over, but hey, I just figured I'd leave some feedback. Especially since I took the time to read the whole thing; I'm finding it hard to get into stories lately.
<3 Amazing job.

I KNEW IT!!! I KNEW Tomas was gay!! Ha, I love being right =P Anyways, gloating and victory-dancing aside, I really like that you're doing these follow-ups. I wasn't quite ready to be done with Defy yet =D <3

This comment is kind of a mashup for the third and fourth chapter... :S I'm just writing down things as I think of them, so hopefully it all makes sense.
This was so cute; I really loved the whole thing. I was so sad to see it was the end :( But the "Bonus Track" was AWESOME! Glad they finally bumped nasties xD
Their laptop/movie date with McDonald's in the field was sweet haha.
The Believers Resurrected Tour made me go :O "WHAAAAA...?" because if that happened in real life, I'd probably die. For real. Best idea ever.
It was cute how Alex bought Net all that stuff for her birthday in the third chapter and Dacian was adorable in chapter 4 :)
I'm so incredibly excited for Time Hasn't Told Anyone Else Yet. Like, it's pretty ridiculous. I'm kind of obsessed. No big deal.

On a side note, I am beyond belief ecstatic for Reclaim Beauty. How did you come in contact with Lisa? I really hope that whatever information you got from her helps you launch this organization to its full potential; improving self-esteem issues is something that definitely needs to be recognized and fought. Just like anyone else, there have been numerous things about myself that make me body-conscious, even when I know I have no reason to be, just because everyone's different. It's just hard not to compare yourself to those around you.

So yeah, basically, in the words of (your fictional version of) Alex Gaskarth, "Thank you for being born." :D

I really loved this short story, and I'm excited for Time Hasn't Told Anyone Else Yet. You have this amazing ability to spin a story complete with plot, fluff, jokes, and, most incredibly, reality. It keeps in the norm of how people usually react and your characters stay in character. You are absolutely brilliant. :)

Also, I'd love to hear more about your self-esteem organization. That's a big issue that I know a lot of people have always had problems with, including myself, and I'd love to hear more about it. Please keep me posted, if you can.

Hahaha, so I laughed out loud multiple times during this chapter.
Baby oil.
McDonalds.
Sex.
This was a fantastic chapter and it was a long time coming. Alex is so fucking sweet and Annette is funny as hell. I can't wait for the next story. :]

Dacian is absolutely adorable. He actually kind of sounds like my nephew. All curious and know-it-all. :)
Hahaha, bedsheet bingo. clever.

Yes!! that made my day, seriously.

and finally!

WOW! That was pretty freaking amazing. I have to say that Dacian is so cute and amazingly bright I swear he's probably smarter than me and I'm 14!
Once again you have produced another master piece and I quite frankly am dying for another chapter from you.

Hurry along with the next story, I'll be waiting.
Loves x

First of all, I'd like to say that Dacian is easily the most adorable character I've ever some across. I absolutely adore his inquisitiveness. He's wise beyond his years and I can definitely understand why Annette was so upset after he and Alessandria left.

As for Alex, I was more than "AWWW"ing at his thoughtfulness throughout the chapter. McDonalds, 'It Happened One Night,' and the "thows of passion," were all more than lovely.

Like usual, just when I think that you're the best, you somehow manage to top yourself. I know it's redundant by now, but this was amazing, and I can't wait to read more from you.

What Alex said before they had sex was probably the like sweetest thing ever!
I loved this little four shot and I cant wait until the next one:-)

loved this <3!
This was so awesome i loevd your whole story!
and some sexy time was necessary for end this as perfect as it ended!
HAHAHAHA its awesome that Lisa adviced you o_o its like kinda unbeliveable! hahahahaha
im waiting for the next part of the Defy Stories!
YAY!

fa la la laaaaaaaaaaaaaa (:
That just made me indescribeably happy!
I love Net and Alex. They are like, so totally, like, perfect... like.
Bah. And you've made Alex even perfect..-er? Gosh. If I ever meet him, I'm not going to see him as ... HIM.. I'm going to see him as who you've portrayed him as!..
Alex ; Hey.
Me ; Hey, where's Net?
Alex ; Who the fuck is Net?
Me ; ... fuck.

You spoil us... :) this chapter was... a treat :? hmm... let's just go with that :)

I can't wait for your organization to launch and from the sounds of it Lisa sounds like a really cool person. AND I can't what for July!

The "rumour" is true. There is a fourth chapter!

ahhhhh so amazing. WHY my subscription managed to not tell em it was updated, i have no clue. but thankfully, I figured out that there was an update.

Again, you managed to completely amaze me. I am so happy. But you're right, disappointed in the no sexy time, so I'm counting on a surprise part 4. (if i assume there will be one, does that really make it a surprise?) also,I'm still hoping for a true sequel =]

However, no matter which way you decide to write it, I love it none-the-less and all-the-more.

I can't wait to see what's in store for the future, If you start any other stories, let me know.I truly love reading your writing.

Amazing end if this is really the end. wink wink. I dont want it to be soooo yeah its not. Keep writing. Oh and thanks so much for the shout out. That was amazing. I kinda fan girled out a little bit. I wasnt expecting it.... Keep up the good work and crank out those chapters. We will be waiting. Not so patiently. Thankyou.

Can you say awwww, when Alex gave her his present!
This was amazing! I can't wait for the next part:-)
yay! there touring together again!

I was about to cry when I read note from Alex to Annette it was so cute an I was just sat there wishing for a relationship like that.
I love your style of writing it makes it a thousand times better and I'm glad you didn't put any sexy fun time in yet like most people cause it ruins it.
Update soon?
Loves x

Words cannot effectively describe how much I loveloveloved this chapter, but I'm going to give it my best shot. The following are just a few of the parts that stuck out to me:

Pete smiled and sipped his iced tea, “Yeah, the hair is all his mom; eyes too. But those cheeks and that smile? All me.”

“All you, Daddy!” Bronx squealed, giving his dad a high-five they’d obviously made a practice of.

I'm a giant sucker for cute kids, and Bronx is definitely one of them. Whenever I see a picture with him with Pete and or Ashlee, my heart melts a little bit. If you can't already tell, I really enjoyed how you put this little bit in there because it's exactly how I imagine Pete and Bronx's relationship.

“Sweetie, you think your mother and I didn’t realize that the random messages we would get at two in the morning were from you accidentally drunk texting the wrong person?”

Did not see this one coming. It's amazing that Annette and her father played beer pong on her birthday. A relationship like that is one in a million. God help me if my parents ever found out about the underage trouble I've been getting into. I'd be locked away until I was 21.

Nate was swaying back and forth dangerously, but Elliott looked close to death. “Mfradagagglwock,” he mumbled, staring at his shot glass.

Patrick’s eyebrows knitted together, “I am not from Fraggle Rock, and I resent the accusation.”

I don't know why this was so funny to me. I guess it was a combination of Elliott's drunkenness, Patrick's amazing ability to understand that unintelligible mess, and the fact that I've received text messages like that.

Three words: Believers Resurrected Tour.

Although you previously mentioned who would be on this tour, I still freaked out upon reading this. I can only imagine how crazy an FOB reunion tour would be. I went to Believers Never Die when they hit Chicago and that was fucking ridiculous. (Waited 7 hours in line and when doors opened, there was a stampede of people. Some girls actually started crying. All the madness was worth it because my bff & I were on barricade for all but Hey Monday.) Part of me still thinks that FOB go on tour again, but I don't want to get my hopes up. Big thanks for bringing my dream to a fictional reality.

“I was going to tell you,” he kissed my cheek, “Thanks for being born.”

Don't even get me started on this line. It was the epitome of adorable. Upon reading, my heart went to mush and I got super smiley. I'm glad that they decided to hold off on the intimacy because this little exchange between Annette and Alex was more than perfect.

With all this in mind, I'd like to award you with the Most Creative Birthday Chapter Award.
You deserve it.
:D