I liked this, very much. I always love reading stories from the viewpoint of the insane, because they really don't think they're insane at all, which is just so amusing to me. I didn't catch any errors, which I can appreciate, and although a few of the sentences were a bit choppy, I felt that it was very fitting for this piece. Great work. (:
June 20th, 2010 at 08:58am