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AHHHHH come on! James still hasn't told the truth! And now you left it on a cliffhanger?! Not fair. I like Sophia. She is handling this well even though she could be freaking out. That was adorable when Craig imagined Will was there. Craig has really grown up, and James seems very small and childlike to me, now at least.

nnnnngggg.
ap exams.
that's what i should be doing right now
studying, that is.
and i'm delighted to hear of a sequel
and i'm a sucker for happy endings
so that's what i'm praying for

AHHHH.
I loved this.
And my fucking computer is being a dirty terrorist,
So I'm going to do this from my phone and I apologize for
Any bouts of autocorrecting making me sound like an illiterate
Dumbass. :3

Kay. Uh. Holy shit.
I seriously loved this.
I mean, there's this ache in my heart right now
Because Will was gone. I knew it was going to
Happen, and I knew he wasn't going to be there
But it was just..fuuuck me, it made me so sad!
And it's not even that Craig can't stand on his own.
Because, obviously, he can. But just that even though
We knew he could stand alone it's weird for the
Safety net to be gone. Especially after all the craziness
That's been happening with the family lately.

FINALLY. James is gonna grow a pair of goddamn
Balls and lay everything out. I'm really excited to see how everything
Goes, because I really want that stupid feeling in my gut
To go away. Jesus, I feel like James is gonna pussy out
Of life every time Craig leaves him alone in a room,
And now that Will's gone I'm just like, freaking out about
Giving Craig too much stress :x
And, c'mon, death of father is a reasonable reason
To come home in pieces. Please don't send my baby broken
Pieces of his baby, Lydia! I'll cry on you!

I'm really looking forward to more.
Please bring Will back soon ): I'm going to have to
Go re-read this because I miss him a lot.
iloveyoumoresoonplez.
o and thnx fr nt kllng Craig :3

I love reading this story so much. Every time I read it it makes me feel so into the story, like its playing before my eyes. I love the way Craig and Will treat each other, and the way his relationship is between him and his dad. I love it :)

Craig is so good to Will. and vise versa! they are so sweet, and i hope that Craigs dad gets what he deserves! he such a dick. :p
Amazing as always, and i can't wait for the next one!

Helllooooo!!! I'm back! Sorry I haven't been commenting, my computer crashed. But whaaa??? Will"s leaving? That kind of makes me sad, I like him, his attitude especially. But when I think about it, it might make Bert a bit more happy, but he's still exposed to Craig. So would it really even help that much? Ugh! James is such a... I don't even know! He makes me want to fucking vomit! Grrr... Okay, I have to go sell Girl Scout cookies now.

Oooohhhh finally James told her...I wanna know what's gonna happen with the family drama. I bet there is going to be a killer argument scene. William is so adorable and so good to Craig. I gigglebarfed when they touched foreheads, that's just too cute. And kudos to Craig for bulking up. Good job Rick! Oh and I laughe when Craig said his dad would try a flyin leap on the highway-couldn't helped it. Hahah

^ fuck doing the fucking code wrong. -.-

Why is Craig so amazing?
He's like, a mother's dream child.
I'm really glad he didn't just let James
off. Even though it brought his mother to
shambles, but shit. It would of been worse
if James had gotten away with it. Then he
probably wouldn't of gotten the help he
needed and it'd only be a matter of
time before he's back on the fucking
roof. -.- Dirty little prick. Make him
better so I can hate him less?
I still have pent up resentment
for the making-Craig-feel-like-shit
deal.

OH NO.
): Craaaaigg, why'd you send Will away?
I know why but just... fuck me.
That can't be good. Will was like, Craig's only
positive emotional support the entire time they were
at the hospital. And Bert hasn't even showed up yet to
wreak proper havoc on the situation, so who knows how
that's gonna play out. ): I'm really weary about
William leaving Craig like that. I know Craig did it
because he can't stand Will to be around everything
and be hurt because it hurts him, but just imagine
how awful he'll be if and when he comes home and
Bert actually threw a god forsaken homophobic
rage filled fit, and threw him out of the house or
disowned him or something. Just, shit. Craig would
be so defeated if that happened. Granted, I know it
hasn't happened yet, and there is always the possibility
that he'll be a lot more understanding. Hell, maybe he'll
sober up if/when he finds out what happened to his other
son. (Hey, maybe Craig can use his newly found powers and
force his dad to talk! :D)

But, fuck, I wish Will had fought harder. Not that I think he
was wrong in respecting Craig's wishes, no no no, that's not
it at all. I just have this nasty sinking feeling about him leaving,
and I just really want him to be there when Craig's world implodes.
But, as always, that scene when Craig was telling Will to leave
was adorrrable. ): Why're they so cute even when they're saying goodbye?

This broke my heart:
"William tugged Craig closer, gripping and pulling him by the hair on the back of his head as he leaned down a bit to press their foreheads together. They kept eye contact, and at some point they’d have been giggling about being cross-eyed, but for now they stayed sober, connected. “I don’t want them to break you,” he whispered back. “I need you to come back to me…all in one piece, okay?”

I love the relationship you've built between the two of them.
I'm sure I'm not alone when I say I adore fluffy shit.
That's probably mostly because I crave a relationship like that.
Just pure, unreserved love for one another. They'd do anything
for each other. I love it.

So please, please bring Craig back to Will all in one piece.
We don't need James to rub off on him. :/
Even though Craig is twice the man James could ever hope to be.

:D Awh, hell yes we have great conversations. ;)
And sorry my stalking capabilities weren't up to par
and I didn't comment last night. ): I did read it then though!
But I kept telling myself "When this movie's over."
but movie was like..three hours long (wtf) and I was like, half
asleep when it was finally over at like, TWO.
Haha, so there's my pathetic excuse, and here's my love all
written out for you. :D I can't wait until there's more, really.
Love youuuuuuuuuuuu. <3

Why is Will such an amazing boyfriend? I want him! :(
I don't want to see him leave Craig behind though, I feel so sorry for them both. I wish I could write stories like this, it's just amazing in every way.

Wow! Just wow!
Oh, man. This is such a freaking amazing story...
I love how well-developed these characters are. I, personally, feel as though I'm getting just a little bit of insight into their lives. Like just a tiny bit, and that's an amazing, profound thing. And the story isn't constantly fluffy, like so many are - even though, yeah, that's not always necessarily a bad thing exactly, it's just nice to see one that isn't all fluffy. One that has mature, serious plot with the occasional dollop of fluff. So yeah, another thing I like about this story.

i'm so sleepy
it's past one at the moment
and i was going to go to sleep
but i couldn't just ignore this update
and i'm glad i didn't
mytiredminddoesn'twantotseewilliamleave.

Just discovered this, and wow!
I love how Will is such a good boyfriend to Craig, he really needs him though all this shit he's going through!
And though James is a complete arse, I feel kinda bad for him for all the shit he's going through too...overall, really great storyline you've got going on here, really interesting!
Look forward to the next update :)

That baby thing was so cute. This whole chapter was just cute. I love Craig and Will together so much <3

i love babies! I cant wait until they get one, cuz they deserve a kid!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Craigs dad is an ass, and i really dont like him!

gotta say, I think I like Will the best.
He's just soo.....cute?
IDK what it is but I like it :)

IT SNOWED HERE TOO.
It's gone now, and I didn't get to play in it long because my hands were like...so fucking cold, but IT HAPPENED.
Anyway, I love this.
So so so so, much.
I'm pretty sure I already said this, but I LOVE how you've written Will and Craig.
One second Will's being Super Boyfriend and being like, the most adorable comforting shit ever,
and then he's cooing over babies in the nursery and him and Craig are just being adorable and wanting kids. (Seriously, I think I'd die if and when they get a kid. They'd be the BEST. DADS. EVER.)
And then Craig's thinking again and he's having another panic attack and Will's immediately back into Super Boyfriend mode, and I could of just died this was so cute.

James. God, what the fuck is his problem?
Sophia deserves better than that. I'm really glad Craig isn't going to let him off the hook, especially since it's killing him on the inside. ): He doesn't need anymore stress. I think he might crack.
I understand that he's all fucked and stuff, but he completely shut his family out.
And treated Craig like SHIT. askldjf;lkajwekm/. James needs a good slap. Good thing Craig provided a BEATING.

Bert... God, I really want him to not flip shit. Or at least the shit that has already been flipped be the end of his shit flipping. ): Criag loved him!

Also, it was funny as fuck when Criag stumbled a bit at tbe beginning. I hate it when that happens, just the "Yes, I'm a bad ass, I'm in power. FUCK I TRIPPED. POWER STATUS EVOKED." (:

Uh, I loved this. I love you!
More soon. (:

Aw! Yay!
A sweet yet savory chapter! I really liked how in one paragraph, there was a really 'aww' tastic thing and then in another, there was a scene where you just wanted to scold somebody. And towards the end, when Craig was telling his father to tell his mother everything, there was both. I personally, wanted to scold James and hug Craig.

AWWW *gigglebarf* They are so cute together! I'm glad Craig is still being strong with his father-and he's taking care of his mama. I love how cute they are }:B

this has been quite a lot of snow this year
i've had seven snowdays in the past two and a half weeks
usually we get three a winter
when the ice storm hit early this week we broke both of our shovels trying to break through the ice
o.o
i have not been stranded in my house for four days though
i think i'd go crazy
i used to like Craig's dad
well, i still do
but not as much