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You're pretty wicked, yourself (;
And I must say... I am going to be ping CRAZY until the fourth.
This was BEYOND intense.
And holy shit, Craig grew a pair.
I do feel bad for James still, even though at the same time I definitely don't think Craig was in the wrong. And seeing him go crazy like that was really heartbreaking, and you wrote it beautifully<3
But, fuck, I really thought James was just being a dick. Co didn't think he had that much shit going down. Still, though. He could of, y'know, not been a douche and fucked with Craig and Sophia all this time. That was really ahitty of him.
And, yeah, my heart kind of stopped when I saw that he was on the roof.
Like, shit, dude. And Craig saved him. He still loves his daddy, I think(: he's just mad about everything that's been going on. But I bet James is okay with Craig, right? James is just super overwhelmed. And he does miss his brother...

Bsjdibwki, I love this, and I'm pretty sure I love you. So you should definitely update soon, 'cause I'm ready to see what shenanigans Craig's newfound backbone can get him into (:

That chapter was so fucking intense.
I swear I was pretty much shaking the entire time.
I flipped out when James went on to the roof...
becasuse as much horrible shit he has done in his life,
I really, really didn't want him to die that way.
Every person has their reasons for being the way they are, you know?
Thank god Craig came up there, just in time.
It did break my heart though,
to see Craig hurting like that,
to hear his father's reaction.
I just want him to finally be happy, you know?
Maybe he'll eventually realize that all he really needs
to feel that way is Will and just knowing he will always be there.
This story has taken so many surprising twists!
You never fail to leave me breathless and craving more. (:
So please update soon,
I can't wait to hear what happens next. <3
You are stunning,
and this story is beautiful.

woah woah woah! I dont like burt, and i dont like James. they're both dicks! and i understand that the both have emotional stress and problems, and such but they dont have to take it out on everyone else. also, WHAT A BITCH MOVE, trying to jump from the roof! seriously! Pissing me off! i just wish that hed except what hes done and try to FIX it!

just a fantastic chapter, your amazing! i love you! update again soon please!

Wow. Okay I loved that too. Every chapter just gets better than the last, and can I just say I like how you tell us when the next update will in the status bar, everyone should do that.
Thankyou for writing this story, it is now my absolute favourite :)

Oh, woah! This story is getting better and better and better with each chapter.

Agh! Man that was tense and emotional! Great writing, you describe each emotion so well. I guess thay kind of explains some of James' behavior (scary case!) but why did he accept Craig at first?! And yay for Craig for finally being okay with who he is. He has grown up 

wow someone's got quite the backbone all of a sudden....i like it :)

oh yeah,
and i loved it like always :]

a lot has just hit the fan

totally in love with this story <3

i apologize for not commenting earlier! It was a great chapter as ALWAYS!!!
i still dont like his dad, and starting to not like his grandpa either! i just dont like homophobes!
and im just trying to piece some things together, but could craigs grandfather (burt?) be referring to this dead son as well? im just wondering. is he talking about craig or his lost son?
but i will say it again, wonderful as ALWAYS!!!!
update again soon!

Oh fuck.
Before I go into a jumbled sentence of how much I'm flipping shit right now,
I want you to know that this is amazing.
And, holy fuck, just abckakwbtmclalwnx.
I love it. So much.
Craig and Will are absolutely adorable.
And they're so good at fixing each other!
I read that scene where Craig was having a panic attack
And Will was just so expertly fixing him at least three times
Before I could continue the rest of the chapter. <3

Now that that's out there and been brought to light,
HOLY FUCKING SHIT.
DICK!

I do feel really bad for James, even though he's kind of been a mega bitch since chapter two.
And Craaaig ): poor baby. Will will (lol) make it better!
I'm ridiculously excited to see what Bert has to say for himself.
In a way, I think he's still generally accepting of Craig, because
They've gotten really close over the course of this story. He's just
generally irked with James. :l
Or maybe I'm full of shit and Bert is a homophobic cunt licking asswipe. -.-

Haha, I really cannot wait to find out
and I'm super happy I found this(:

this amazing, beautiful story never fails to leave me entirely breathless.
You are completely stunning for writing this for us. (:
I absolutely adore every single chapter,
but this most recent update literally almost gave me a heart attack.
The emotions were so raw and vivid,
I had to keep reminding myself that I wasn't actually there, seeing it all.
You have such an amazing talent for writing, such a way with words!
I just can't get over it.
But, this was amazing, as usual.
Please keep on updating. <3

Oh, woah. I'm late commenting/reading this update, 'cause my internet died...but yeah.
Anyway, such an amazing update. The ending, again, just made the entire chapter pop.

I read chapter 15 last night! Man that was stressful (which you showed the stress and awkwardness of the situation very well) I also love how William kind of became the strong one by protecting Craig. And wow, the last comment Bert made...ouch.

Urgh, that was an amazing chapter. That ending almost killed me.
I need everything to be okay, and I feel so sorry for James and Craig.
:(

I'm feeling so bad for James. Seriously, i know he has issues, but Bert is such a man-bitch to him!

o.o
**PAGECLAIM!**

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why does his grandfather have to be like that?
:[

p.s. you're link isn't correctly coded

Oooh, that's kind of a relief to know that Bert is okay-ish, I thought he was going to die. I feel like everybody's relationship with Bert is very strained, but as a character I really like him., so I'm glad he is still alive. I like the idea of MotorBabies that Bert may have heard Craig hear he was gay, it's an interesting concept.
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