Yes, commented on this before xD I have yet to figure out who the cute guy is. Hmmm. Anyways, I love how simple and adorable this is. I can't say much because as of right now, I'm rendered speechless by the amazing details you have here. The descriptions are gorgeous; all the emotions are there and you can feel them as you're reading. Girl, you have major talent :D Amazing job <3
Benji Barker, dear, your work is always so beautiful. The descriptions you give to us to reveal the story that goes through your mind astounds me everytime. It's so vivid - so real. So real I feel like I'm there. I swear I die a little inside when I read your work because it is in fact so beautiful. <3
I look forward to reading your stuff. Your layouts are always perfect and neat. Your description is always stunning. Your characters are always brilliantly well-defined.
Before anything else, the picture was amazing. Mustache! Eyes! <3
I liked the interaction between the characters, his soft whisper almost like a term of endearment and her hostile hiss; "my name is Roxanne!". They made a perfect not-pair, they were similar in that you could see the chemistry between them, yet they saw each other differently.
Nicely written with a sweet end. Something I notice about your stories is that there is always some underlying message in their. Just like some general point for readers to take however they may. It is nice actually because it's kind of like a bonus to reading such a lovely story.
Oh wow. I love this so much! Your descriptions never cease to amaze me and I truly loved how the characters were shown. I love how I acted in front of him, simply because it was so realistic of me to say. Ben was really sweet and I just loved the last line. You. Are. Amazing.
Amazing job <3