Just read the complete story and I absolutely ADORE it. I really like how it is somewhat a parallel to Amelia Atwater-Rhode's "shapeshifter series", considering she is one of my favorite authors. Again very well written. =)
I stumbled upon your story and I liked it, but I can't help but be reminded of Hawksong this book by amelia atwater-rhodes. Your story lines are simliar, except hers revolve around hawks and snakes and the first couple of your chapters are almost the same to hawksong. I'm not saying you stole the idea from amelia, because there some things that are different, but I couldn't help but think immeaditly of hawksong when I read your story....
Aw (: Thank you! I had a rough past week and I'm estatic to come back to read a new two chapters! Although, I will admit that I'm a tad confused on the last chapter. I'm kind of caught up in the moment so I'll go re-read that to try to figure what happened. I get that something made the girls upset and Zanibar had to leave and that he killed someone.
I think Zanibar would make an awesome personal guard. He would defiantly guard her with his life since he loves her so much. Gurl... I read this, and you can defiantly see how much you have improved over this website. You write amazing stories but from Where's the Heart and the rest of your stories that I have read leading up to this one, are just getting better and better. Your writing has just captivated me. Every time that you post a new story, that story becomes my favourite of all your others. (Like this one is my favourite now.) I think it would be: 1- Tie it With a Ribbon 2- Learning to Swim 3- Trembling with the Strings!!!! 4- Edwin and Jade series <3 5- your amazing Like a Shattered Mirror