July 3rd, 2010 at 06:06pm
This is an amazingly written, beautiful story that shows how important one person could be to other people, no matter who they are. I only saw one grammar mistake and it was very minor, an 'a' in the beginning where there shouldn't have been one. I really, really liked this and I think that you showed the emotion of loving very, very well. I loved this. I can't say that enough. Very well done.
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I can't really say anything else but 'wow'. This was just so beautifully written and flowed so easily and expertly. I love how each chapter was a different set of people, but the stories wound together since it was different generations of the same blood line. This was just amazing... and you could tell all the characters really love each other. You definitely have the right to be proud of this entry.
Amazing job. <3