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    Thanks for entering xD

    Well, that was certainly different from your other entry. The grammar was great as I guessed and I must admit, you took this a different way then I thought you would. I didn't really think phone sex, but that was interesting, I guess. I like how you tied in the song "I can get sexual too" with the entire entry as well as using the title of the entry as a baby name for the girl on the other end. It was well written.

    You're a good writer.
    August 1st, 2010 at 06:28am