Help! I'm Housing a Hero - Comments

Hero's not like her dad right? Thatd be funnily awkward. Hopefully we will learn her dad's story soon.

WEEEEEE!!!!!! UPDATEEEEE!!!!!
that chap was Awesome!
me has a mayor problem with skittles!!!!!
i read these chap in like 7min (that pretty rad cause these chapter was loooong!)
and then i start jumping around my house too burn some energy cause i can't write a half decent comment if i'm too hyper!
can't wait for da next updaaate!!! :D

ACK!!! This is super fantabulous!!! (Yes, Yes, I know that was so terribly Disney Channel) I absolutely LOVE the long chapters! Ok. *takes deep breath* So yeah, I saw that this was up, and read all 3 chapters you had up. (I stayed up until 6am because it was so addictively good!)

-Katie (The Fairy)

The first thing I want to say is that I really didn't expect this.

I was bored and just browsing and found your story.

I almost didn't read it because I had read some other stories that just didn't flow right and was getting bored of being bored.

But I am so glad I did read it.

I love how it's not completly cliche (it is a hero story, so it has to have some cliche moments) and that it just keeps my interest.

So I'm going to subscribe, but I have only one problem...

Why are you only updating on Mondays?!

Seriously, you need to update more.

Lol, but I aslo understand that we all have lives so I forgive you for it.

I will be waiting for the next chapter!

Oh, and my prediction?

I don't think Hero's Andrew.

I mean, yes, half of me says that Andrew is the only logical choice...

But you've been so unpredictable with your cliches that the other half says it's going to be some random guy.

So I will save my prediction until we learn the identity of Hero.

Then I'll just go with the half of me that turns out was right.

It's how I win things in life, lol

I...cannot wait for Monday. With all the SHHH...... going on right now here, this is a very, very welcome distraction.

I loved the update, and I got a sorta-semi-half-mention!!! YAAAY!!!

Until your next FANTASTIC update, Erin!!

I think the hero's cute.

So I was just wondering are we gonna ever learn were Hero comes from? Like is he an expirement gone awry, born that way, or even bit by chemically enhanced spider? :) I don't know many people who could take a giant exploding robot in the air and survive. Liked the chapter can't wait till Monday.

Pss at first I was kinda scared because the title seems cliche (not that I don't like it. I actually really do like it) so I thought it be another one of those at first glance the girl is in love with the hero and automatically becomes the DID kind of story. I like how she's hesitant right now about it all and wasn't to keen on the idea of having to be saved. Its way different then the usual stories so props.

Hey! I haven't had time to get on mibba lately but I was happily surprised to find out you are making another story. I'm glad you decided to write your idea out because I really like! Its extremely original and very entertaining. I can't wait to read more! I love your stories and you are definitely one of my favorite writers on mibba. You never cease to amaze me with your plots and characters. Keep it up!
Ps I don't know why they bug some people but I love long chapters but either way is fine, short or long. I'm not picky on length as long as what's in it is good. =)

YAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!
a new story! goodbye boredom!
i have to tell you i have read the first 2 chaps and i already love it!
i bet the friend dude of her is the Hero right?!!!
i hope that you finish thizzz one!!!
i'm waiting still for the sequel/prequel of the dear and beloved elf boy!!!!!!
don't worry i'll be as patient as i can.
i'll shall go now to subscribe!!!! :D

I think I'm going to message you with a guess or assumption of mine. It may or may not be true...but if it is, I don't want to give it away here. I know there are some people who read all the other comments when it's this early on...like me...*cough cough*

So I was disappointed that there hasn't been any more on "The Search For The Lucky One"...but this fills up the void fairly well. Besides, I know what you mean when you say you have more than one story that you have to write. There are some that if I don't write them, I forget them. And thinking about it now, there are some that I've forgotten that I know, somewhere, would have turned out readable. You know?

So I'm not mad in the least that you picked this one to work on xP

I love it so far...and I'm going to subscribe and send you a message with my assumptions. Hehe xP

I was actually really excited to see that you've written something new.

At first, I thought it was a new chapter to the sequel but after getting over a second of disappointment - when I realized it wasn't, I seemed excited again.

I'm seriously going to want to read anything you write. I just love your writing style and ability to come up with the best story-lines. I just know that this new story, just at first glance of the title, is going to be a good one.

Reading the first two chapters, I've already got the gist of what's going on... but not how you're going to go about it. And that's good: Keep us on our toes. :)

I'm loving (Oh really, Keri? She wouldn't have guessed) the new female character. I love her sarcastic, prideful nature. And I'm really curious as to what else she may be immune to... or even why she IS immune to some things.

Plus, Hero is a cutie. Can't wait to learn more about him... aye? ;)

Um... oh! And the long chapters. Keep 'em, no matter what anyone else says. I just love it when I'm really into a story and they update with these really long chapters. I mean, if it's really long then the reader is more than satisfied to wait for the next equally long chapter. But... that's just my thoughts.

Looking forward to the next chapter. Whenever you're ready. :)

i go to ur profile and see you have a new story. i jus read the title and i knew i will love it. the summary just proved it. i read a little of the 1st chapter and know i am sooo going to love it. i really wanted to comment so i am commenting before i finish the chapter because i already know i'm going to love it. and i am going to be your loyal reader again!

Whew... long chapter. I don't have many suggestions, except that there are quite a few grammar mistakes, which you can always fix later (I don't mean to sound too picky), and the background is a bit distracting. Colorful stars make my eyes hurt, but I just changed the layout to default and so it's all good. Great story, though! I love reading about heroes.

I just read the summary. It is very interesting.