Uh-oh. This seems like it will be trouble. Haha. Joe's secretly excited, crazy boy. Awe, well this story is fantastic, of course I'm going to comment :) Can't wait to see where this goes.
Oh gosh. She better not hurt Nick or Joe will blow his top. I can't believe Denise just watched them. That made me laugh a little. I can't wait to see what happens girly.
Oh. Man, that was getting a little steamy in the kitchen. I like how you described the two girls in contrast from Joe's point of view. I thought that was neat. I really can't wait to see where this goes. It's amazing so far.
Wow. I can't believe you don't have any comments on this yet! I just read both chapters and it's great so far. I really can't wait to see where it goes. I've subscribed and I can't wait for the next update :)