Vivacity - Comments

@ Caught In A Mosh
Definitely trying! (: I have a lot of chapters hand-written (that'll need major editing on a computer), but I cannot actually write it on a computer and post it at the moment as I do not have internet at home (currently at the library to check in --- sorry it's taken so long to reply.) However, I should hopefully get internet sometime this month so I hope you stay with me until then!

Just discovered your story, it's awesome. That's all, please update as soon as possible??

I really like this. It's honestly a true, realistic story. It's something that would happen and still does happen.
I really love the first chapter. I've actually done it before. ;) Well written.

Sorry I haven't updated, guys! I actually have half the chapter finished, just need a few more paragraphs and then it needs to be edited. I hope I don't disappoint you guys. (:

I really like the direction this story seems to be going. I have two bits of constructive criticism if you care, though. One, I think you give a little too much away in the character descriptions. The second is only a personal opinion, while many people do abuse it, I don't think it's fair to make pot out to be a 'bad drug'. Like I said, it's just a personal view, but that's all I have to say on this story so far. Keep it up, it's good. I look forward to future chapters.

I like this so far. Your use of language is great and I can't wait to see how the plot develops.

I love it:))

I don't really have the time to read this at the moment, but I subscribed so I can read it later. I'm definitely interested, though, and I'll tell you what I think when I read it. :D

i love this(: