You Never Know When You’ll Run Out of Time - Comments

  • Thatmom

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    Just finished reading this again. It's a wonderful piece of writing and certainly has stood the test of time. Thank you for sharing such a beautifully written story. I hope you never give up writing.
    February 7th, 2014 at 06:33pm
  • FlaFlyer

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    That was a beautiful story. I felt sick to my stomach when he cheated on her, but in the end, I was rooting for them. Loved it!
    November 5th, 2012 at 09:05pm
  • jazter

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    Better late than never, I'd like to think that authors like to know that their works are appreciated down the line, not just at the time of publishing. This was marvelous!
    October 11th, 2012 at 10:50pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    So amazing. Perfect ending! <3
    November 8th, 2011 at 02:10am
  • soupy

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    The epilogue was perfect - it tied up a lot of loose ends and showed that the future, while tinged with sadness, was bright for Mel and Jonny. Maybe it proved that arranged marriages work - although I like to think it proved that "Mother knows best!"

    I loved your writing - your attention to historical details - and the fact you updated on a regular basis. It allowed the reader to become attached to the characters and made the story very easy to follow.

    I cant wait for you to start another one - I would love to see you tackle a Sid story. I am sure you could do it justice!

    Great work!
    October 28th, 2011 at 07:50pm
  • helloxellen

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    I can't believe this is over! So sad! I absolutely adored this story and really am going to miss it. Fantastic job. with everything, I reallllly liked the epilogue, too. So cuteand you had me tearing up at spots. - Definitely looking forward to your next stories :).
    October 27th, 2011 at 07:31pm
  • Dee Flyrs Grl

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    Sad, but great ending!
    Loved it!
    Great job!
    October 27th, 2011 at 06:02am
  • samlo

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    Amazing ending to an amazing story. You never cease to amaze me with what you come up with. Either I'm just really emotional or I still have some of my own grieving left to get through, but I cried reading the part about Nicolette's funeral. And I cried even harder when Jon brought Lord Stanley to her gravesite. That was just so sweet of him to do.

    I honestly cannot wait to read what stories you have next. :)
    October 26th, 2011 at 07:26am
  • RosiePosie08

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    Love the ending I cried!
    October 26th, 2011 at 06:52am
  • JTCC1950

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    I love this story sad to see it over, but I am excited that you are writing some more stories!
    October 26th, 2011 at 03:57am
  • JTCC1950

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    I love this story sad to see it over, but I am excited that you are writing some more stories!
    October 26th, 2011 at 03:57am
  • bublbabie

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    LOVED LOVED LOVED this story sooooo much. The only thing that would have made this ending better is if you went sometime into the future with babies
    October 26th, 2011 at 12:07am
  • Breakneckorange

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    Loved the epilogue...couldn't be better.
    October 25th, 2011 at 11:47pm
  • samlo

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    Aww. I'm so glad that they finally got married. I can't wait to read the epilouge. I seriously hate when you end your stories though. They are just so amazing. But I guess all good things must come to an end sometime, right? I'm also very excited to see what other stories you come up with. :)
    October 20th, 2011 at 05:56am
  • RosiePosie08

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    Love the ending so sweet! Can't wait for the epilogue
    October 19th, 2011 at 08:47pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Aw that was such a perfect last chapter!
    I'm bummed it's almost over but I'm excited for the epilogue! <3
    October 19th, 2011 at 08:40am
  • Dee Flyrs Grl

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    That was beautiful!
    All the dresses were very pretty.
    Great update!
    Hate to see this end, but can't wait to see how exactly you end it.
    October 19th, 2011 at 07:32am
  • soupy

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    Wow!!! What a masterpiece. You certainly outdid yourself with this one.

    You fully captured the craziness and emotion of a wedding day - I really felt that I was a fly on the wall watching everything unfold. I marvelled at your level of description!!

    And the dress was amazing!!!

    It is sad that the story is ending - all good things must - but I do look forward to the epilogue!!
    October 19th, 2011 at 06:53am
  • Big.City.Dreams

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    Hahaha just finsished your authors note. And I'm very glad that comments are appreciated. Lol. The whole possesion thing at the end, I just loved it. So very much. I can't believe she wore that jersey though. What a nice lady.

    I'm so sad it's over but it was a truly great story. Amazing. Wonderful. Perfection.

    I can't wait for the epilogue. But yet, I still am not ready to say goodbye to this one yet. I loved it. :)

    Thank you.
    October 19th, 2011 at 05:48am
  • Big.City.Dreams

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    When Jon called her Mrs. Toews, it was just so precious, I swear I teared up. C'est parfait! The TJ bit was nice too. The keeping Jonny from growing old thing struck a chord. The wedding was beautiful. You did an amazing job. :)
    October 19th, 2011 at 05:42am