I really like this one because I can relate to her, what she's like, what she does. How she overthink about her feelings. I wonder what will happen, she should loose up a little bit. It's John O'Callaghan that we're talking about here, for fuck's sake!!!!! Nobody can resist to the guy, seriously. hahahahaha Update pleaseee :(
“Dad, would you like to finish to clean up for today?” should be “Dad, would you like me to finish cleaning up for today?” lol but other than that so far ur grammar is pretty good.
The irony of all this is John is the only guy in the band who seems to have never had a girlfriend, and seems to be the nice guy. And Kennedy was rumored to have cheated on his girlfriend. And everyone plays john out to be the player, and theres a youtube video where john says he's a virgin. yaaaaaaa.
Ooooh!! I like this one too :) Yay for Kennedy, I'm glad she chose him over Halvo, even though I do love Halvo, but still, Elliot was right, Kennedy is hotter ;) and sweet and nice.