We'll Sing This Symphony of Sympathy - Comments

First off: I extremely appreciate the fact that you went for an unhappy ending. It fits the story much better than a happy ending would :)
I love the title; it draws you in. This whole story does that; it's one that you can't stop reading, because you have to know what happens next.
Superb description, as well.

First off, I want to say that the layout was awesome.
Now, I really, really enjoyed this story. I was pulled in right at the first paragraph and was completely hooked by the third. The description in this is wonderful. I've never read a suicide story quite like this one.
The fact that it switched points of view offered more insight into the characters and the issues and conflicts they were facing.
I was waiting for Oliver to walk in before Adrian could kill herself, but I was somewhat glad he didn't. Every story doesn't need a happy ending. If Oliver had walked in, it probably would have killed the story.
You also nailed the song and theme head on. Great work!