Shell - Comments

Judging for the contest! :D

Layout: Even though it was clean-cut and simple, I did adore the layout. It was easy to read, the colors were pretty, and I could find absolutely nothing wrong with it. :) - 10/10
Spelling/grammar/sentence structure: There was one thing that I have to point out. Her baby blue's stay vacant, staring at her attacker, her rapist, her boyfriend. The apostrophe in 'blues' is unnecessary, and that should be in past tense, not present. ;) Other than that, your flow, structure, grammar, spelling and the like were all just spot-on and perfection. ;) - 10/10
Characters: YAY FOR INSANE CHARACTERS. I so consider him to be insane, even though I loved him. I love how you made him say only that one line: "It's because I love you." I think if you'd have made him say anymore than that, the entire thing would've felt off. He was just a perfectly written out character. Oh, and I'm not gonna say a damn thing about dead girl, other than that you write about death very well. xD - 10/10
Plot: There wasn't much plot, but in all honesty there hardly ever is in a oneshot. Even though it was two words short () of my requirements, I think making it longer would have ruined it. I love how you started out with her already dead, and how he felt about her being so perfect in death. I really enjoyed the sex scene, and the flashback to how he actually killed her. - 10/10
Overall: I really, really loved it overall. Seriously, it's right up my alley, it was beautifully written, and I was thinking of A Little Piece of Heaven the entire time. And the ending was just amazing, going with what he said in the beginning.

Wow this was awesome.
Seriously fucked up, but awesome.

This was so fucking amazing.
I could read this again and again.
It was brilliant, and you really captured everything perfect.

This, my dear, is perfection.

This was so, so good. It was well written and I loved the clarity of it. Your descriptions and subsequently the imagery really stood up. It was a fantastic piece and I really enjoyed reading it.

Eeeek; this was pretty fucked up. Haha. But very well written.