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  • bucky barnes.

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    I loved the concept of this story. Taking the red brick road...brilliant :) You executed the story amazingly (which is apparently a real word. Go figure) and I loved your descriptions. Easy to follow and yet very thoughtful and meaningful too.

    Great job!
    September 19th, 2010 at 03:43am
  • Audioblue

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    I'm so glad I'm not the only one who thought of this. I actually rewrote The Wizard of Oz in like sixth grade, with Dorothy taking the red brick road...of course, mine ended differently than this. But...ya know.At least I'm not the only one that thinks this way.
    September 10th, 2010 at 06:02am
  • cherry is gone.

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    That was amazing. I was shocked to see many updates in one day, or so. But I was happy and sad. I loved the ending. Very Alice. Geeze, you and I should right a story together. The only thing is I saw Birdo coming.
    June 30th, 2010 at 08:20am
  • LutherJames

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    really really like this. Most of mibba posts are terrible. the way you worded the way the man reacted to tobo's first bite though in the first chapter could have been worded better, just pointing it out. The 'very male yell' could possibly been 'a yelp rang out from the man's strangely voice rang out as he tried to free himself of the dog's grip' or something like that?
    June 30th, 2010 at 01:54am
  • cherry is gone.

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    Wow, this is really good, I like it and I have subscribed. I hope you write more (: I hope Dorothy finds toto and Jack. Mmmm Jack.
    June 27th, 2010 at 06:16pm
  • St_Atrocity

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    This sounds fascinating so far. It sounds like a really unique plot and I can't wait for more
    June 25th, 2010 at 03:29am