You're Holding My Heart - Comments

  • Totidem Verbis

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    I didn't think it was possible to love a chapter more than the last one, but I loved this chapter! I was a little worried about Charlie and Kellan at first, and Rob and Paty, but everything worked out perfectly! Kel actually showed up on time, and Paty is going to be a mommy! And Rob is going to be the bestest daddy! I love how they both made an unconscious decision to have children without even talking it out first. They're just so in tuned to one another, you know? Oh, and Gaby looked beautiful!
    June 6th, 2012 at 12:39am
  • Totidem Verbis

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    YAY!!! This chapter was so full of happiness! Delicious food, delicious Robert (is it just me or are there a lot of yummy guys named Robert?), happy news from the doctor, and happy news from Gaby & Jonas! Oh, I love weddings! Especially the ones you write :)
    June 2nd, 2012 at 12:19am
  • BlueDreams

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    Hello hun :) Oh it's alright, don't worry. Actually this story has taken a lot of twists and turns in my imagination. I also cried when writing and re-reading the chapters, I love this story so much.
    Thank you for reading and commenting!
    May 13th, 2012 at 08:53pm
  • Totidem Verbis

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    So much happened....

    When Paty got diagnosed with cancer, I nearly died. Seriously, hun, I've been wiping the tears away for the past few chapters. She got so sick with the chemo and everything, and Rob was just being so sweet. Then the wedding...You know how much I love your wedding scenes. I'm sorry I wasn't here for every chapter, but this story has been amazing and so emotional. I'm pretty sure I'll cry when it's all over too.
    May 13th, 2012 at 08:40pm
  • Lost Cause

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    YAY! I love coming home to updates! (And new stories...)

    I loved the update, hun! I wonder why Rob is so protective around Taylor? Hmm...And YAY for Italy! I can't wait to see what happens while they're there XD
    October 11th, 2010 at 01:12am
  • AlyBallyBee

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    I'm glad you updated again : )
    October 8th, 2010 at 09:07pm
  • Lost Cause

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    I love this story already!!! Three chapters and sooo much has happpened. I can't wait to see what happens next!
    August 29th, 2010 at 12:53am
  • Cake.Mix.94

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    Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it.
    LOVE IT!
    Next soon please!
    August 1st, 2010 at 06:20pm
  • azthebest0

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    cool story. i really like it. i hope u continue the sequel soon. thnx a lot
    July 5th, 2010 at 09:17pm
  • Thelovelostbecka

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    Hey wen u have a chance check out ma stories. u might like them. :D
    July 4th, 2010 at 08:38pm
  • Thelovelostbecka

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    Wow! I like it so far. I subscribed u! So please post more. And dnt stop writing. :D
    July 4th, 2010 at 08:38pm