I am somehow pissed by the fact that John Ohh stopped the friggin' kiss. damn him. LOL. see, you're so persuasive. I'm engrossed with your story. well done!!! UPDATE and COMMENT me. :) hey want to read my story?
Hey best friend! I've been waiting for you to post this for a long time and I'm happy you did. I know how much you love the sex scenes. hahahaha uncomfortable? Well whatever, you're probably gonna get eighty-five more subscribers after this. & I do care about Melanie, just try to throw Kenny in there more in the next few chapters, kay? or Garrett because he's always the good guy.
P.S. If you get seven more subscribers from this chapter I'll update Love Me Patiently. (:
comment me again. I'm still you're number one faaan! :D and yes,I made MayMeEk read this!! she's a freak when it comes to John Ohh. and KYLE BURNS is HOT. XD
i think i love you. LOL! i love you for writing this! XD seriously. i want more!!!! :)) i hope you update soon, seriously, i do. you make my toes curl whenever i read John and Mel's sweet moments.. aaah! :DD
forget about vampires. This is awesome. and dude, you have to comment me. COMMENT me when you update this ok. add me. :D or blaah. just tell me if you updated this okay? aaah.
and I'm so happy this isn't one of those slashes. :D
Wow, this is really good! Finally a good romance that doesn't involve vampires. No offence if you like vampire romances... I'm just a little sick of them. This is midly cliche, but then again, what isn't? That's a very good first chapter, please keep writing ^.^
lol. Awesome! Awesome! This is just brilliant. update. puhlease!
Why can't he do it though?
Heeeey. UPDATE!