like good for Kennedy. Seriously, I get what Melanie is doing by wanting to feel control, but - she's playing with fire over there.... Still Team John, but also Team Melanie is gonna end up alone. lol
i feel bad for kennedy }: i just wish he'd accept that mel likes him, and stop pushing her away. they're so great together(: john needs to just, gtfo. and come be with me ;D haha. but i LOVED this chapter; it was greaaaaat {:< and, i can't believe poor mel cuts herself. that's just heartbroken)': and now, kennedy rejected her & she's gonna be even sadder. awe, pooooooor mel D': but anyway, keep up the GREAT work & keep those updates coming out ((:
i'm alwaysss team kennedy<3 he's a sweetie pie, i just wanna eat him alllllll up ;D anyway, i don't think that sucked. but i didn't get what kenny & mel were doing at the end o: anyway, keep up your amazing writing! (:
TEAM KENNY!!! XDD LOLs. That took a very long time. ahaha. And yes, I forgive you as hell. But Kenny was so sweet here. I'm not going anywhere. I swear!!!! oh damn, that made me go all jello. You make me feel so happy KEtely. XD
I've just read your entire story. AHH! YOU SERIOUSLY HAD ME ON AN EMOTIONAL ROLLERCOASTER THE ENTIRE TIME!!!!!! I had to keep reading until chapter 21. Update soon! Btw after reading the entire thing in one sitting. I think John's the one Melanie should be with. Just saying...
i felt really bad about the shower scene. its really awful that whenever she takes a shower she remembers that incident and just breaks down. makes me want to hunt down the guy who raped her and SERIOUSLY get a horny gorilla and get him fucked. *lets out sigh of frustration* but i can't cause he doesn't really exist in reality but whatevs. LOL
i lalaLOVE how they revisited the tree house. idk why but reading that part just really made me so giddy. :D that tree house sounded so awesome, laced with their childhood memories and all.. they must've felt so nostalgic. i almost got jealous there, i wish i shared a tree house with my best friend but she lives like a town away and its just impossible for a tree house that long to exist. xD i liked how they talked about everything and secrets came out - like everything was finally laid down on the surface. i love their new promise because it'll make things a lot less complicated but.... i highly doubt they'll keep that. seriously. LOL.
oh, ketely, you know i love all your updates, i no longer need to remind you of how much of a writing genius you are because i've already told you countless of time and you might get tired of hearing it and make me stop saying it to you... so for now imma stop reminding you that! XD
Does this mean Kennedy wins??? :D hhaha Awesome update! I bet they don't keep their promise of being best friends. And I bet that...Melanie breaks it first :)
It's so sad that she can't even take a shower, without bursting into tears. I loved that they revisited the treehouse. I kind of expected John to say more than what he did, When Melanie told him the truth as to why she stopped painting. And them going back to being just friends? Eh, I don't really see that working out. Lol. In fact, I see it just causing more problems for the both of them. I loved this update, as always, and can't wait for the next one! (:
I kept on laughing at the last part. don't trust anyone[\b] meanie! :D I am still giggling about that, that was such a slap on the face for John. Anyway, I loved it. The whole chapter. Well, I feel like I don't want them to be friends. I don't want them to be best friends either. I want them to be as lovers without Taylor in the picture. I know, I know, there's Kenny but dude, Kenny's not playing big parts recently.
So, if you ever change your mind about Kenny then I might change mine too. And I forgive you for being a day late. LOL. Next time be ON TIME.
Oh, and I CAN'T BELIEVE SHE GOT RAPED. AND THAT SHE DIDN'T WANT TO REPORT IT. I mean, I guess I can understand because who would want to drag it out and re-live it over and over when everyone asked her questions. But she seems to not be able to let it go either way. Is she so afraid of John because he has green eyes like her attacker?? And I'm glad she finally picked Kenny first for something!!
I kind of lost track of this for a while but I'm glad I got back to it!!! So Melanie and John. John and that girl(I'm drawing a blank). Melanie and Kennedy. I am fersure Team Kennedy!!!! He's just so sweet to her. Plus I always always always root for the underdog/best friend. Always. I'm super excited for the sequel. I hope there will be more Garrett!! I'm in love with his nose ring :)