Strawberry Fields Forever - Comments

Aww! I love this update. I love Lucy and Jude's relationship <3 This line is my favorite: The hopeless feeling sunk in as he was pushed away from the girl he loved, her body turned towards him as she was taken away.
LET THE PEOPLE PROTEST, DAMMIT.
This is amazing (: <3

To be honest.
I'm a Beatles fan.
But never ever in my life have I seen the movie Across The Universe but your story makes me feel like I'm there, it really does.
It's just so wonderfully descriptive it's amazing =D
I cannot wait to see where this goes

I haven't seen Across the Universe, but the Beatles make me melt. <3
Your description is great and your writing flows nicely. I really enjoyed this.
I can't wait to see where this goes and how successful it'll be, I can see serious potential.

I love it! How'd you get so good at being discriptive?!
I can't wait to see how it goes!

This is really good... a little confusing in places, but good!

I loved this! Across The Universe is one of my favorite movies, and I love how you wrote this.

This is so brilliant. I love how you connected art and fruit and war and music and just so many things together in this. It made it so real, it made the emotion so real, and it made everything so much more interesting. Everything is beautifully written and very powerful. <3

This made me want to watch Across the Universe. I love the Beatles, and this song is one of my favorites.

I love this, you're a fantastic writer, and you're fantastic in getting into the minds of the characters. :'D

I'm going to have to be a little hyper right now. This story was MADE for me to read. The Beatles, of course, are love, and Strawberry Fields Forever is my favourite song by them<3

You are a great writer. Your mix of sentence lengths and the structure of your writing makes it quite powerful:
"That felt like a bullet to Jude's chest."

Love<3

This was one of my favorite scenes in the movie, along with Lucy in the Sky with Diamonds and I Am The Walrus. Seriously, great job.
You really go Jude down, and his hatred for the protestors as well.
Gooooood deal.
I loved it. :)

I agree with Alexander Bernadotte, I've never seen it, either, Aha! Anyway, your writing makes me feel like I'm there and for that I applaud you on. You're an amazing writer, dear, do not ever let anyone tell you different because they're lying. (: I look forward to reading more.

In all honesty, I've never see Across the Universe D: I probably should. But anyways, since I haven't seen the movie, I can say that this makes me want to see it. You portrayed it very well (:
Lovely job! <3

This is written so well and I really enjoyed reading it. I think that you're a talented writer!
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The way you portrayed the scene(s) and all were amazing, and so were your descriptions. :)

Excellent job!

Loved this-never found a ATU story before:)
Subscribing!

Oh my god, I have the urge to throw the cherries on the table at something...though they aren't as soft as a strawberry, I bet I could get my anger out alright.
I really love how you ended it, you can tell.
If this is new, that must be why I haven't stumbled upon it and read it, because I know I sure as hell should have if it--okay, I'm like, droning now and I don't understand what I'm saying.X)

I've seen a couple Beatle stories here and there, but I've never liked one before.

Until I read this.

Scared ya, I know I did. (;

I thought this was amazing. You did an excellent job of becoming Jude and getting into his mind to express his emotions through words. Great job, I can't wait to read more :3

You portrayed the scene quite well. You added proper emotion and described what was going on rather beautifully, I might say. I am an Across The Universe fan myself, and you've added wonderful color to that scene. You might want to do more with it so it doesn't seem too much like you're simply putting words to a scene that has already been played out. Make it more your own. I'm curious to see where you take this. :]