Theadore Thomas. - Comments

  • Gorgak

    Gorgak (100)

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    I find this story to be really interesting in many ways, but yet confusing which does draw some thinkable thoughts into my head. I'm debating whether the ending was so great or not, but it does speak out that this man was clearly a psychopath. But then again he was only concerned as to what name he yelled out for the news cast to all be puzzling over.
    Still, I do like the story and how it expressed his thoughts. I don't see much of the many faces he holds, but does describe what some murderers probably think about these kinds of situations. I would've probably detailed the ending a bit more in the end, but I do like the story the way it is. The ending isn't so bad, really, just a bit of a cut off I think.
    Keep on writing your stories!
    June 28th, 2010 at 08:51am