I sort of really liked this, showing how they love each other and are going to stay like that forever. I like how even though they died, they're still together. I like how you turned them into the very thing that they hated in the beginning. However, one of the rules was that you can't use the emotion's word, and you sort of used it a few times, but that's not a super big deal. Your grammar and spelling were pretty good. xD
I sort of really liked this, showing how they love each other and are going to stay like that forever. I like how even though they died, they're still together. I like how you turned them into the very thing that they hated in the beginning. However, one of the rules was that you can't use the emotion's word, and you sort of used it a few times, but that's not a super big deal. Your grammar and spelling were pretty good. xD