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  • Billie Joe Armstrong

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    Aww Kristina... Arms
    I need to see what the fuck the last thing I wrote was on this. XD
    If it's done or nearly done I'll try and post it up.
    October 26th, 2009 at 08:20pm
  • Slap Happy Bullet

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    i miss this.
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    terribly.
    October 26th, 2009 at 02:43am
  • Billie Joe Armstrong

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    A lanky boy of about ten scanned the lunchroom for an appropriate table to sit, looking just as out of place as he felt. His blue eyes darting from table to table, group to group.
    Wow Young!Mike is so adorable. :arms:

    “I…I think I need you to stay. So I can tell him.”
    -can't help but giggle-
    This part is really tense (apart from my giggle fit.) It's really well done. I can really feel Mike's nervousness. And you dragged it on, which just made me feel even more nervous. :XD

    Billie nodded weakly and moved forward, hugging Mike softly.
    :cheese: I love how they're not all "LET'S MAKE OUT AND HAVE SEX NOWWW" straight away, how they actually talk and hug and whatnot before attacking each other's faces. :tehe:

    Mike’s eyes widened. “Y-You told Adrienne?”
    Oh my goodness, I gasped out loud.

    I love this story! :arms: Poor Billie.

    The MySpaces are pretty cool too. :file: Mike's is private? How rude of him. :tehe:

    Also, where did you get the title from? Because I've seen Mike wearing a shirt with that on it. :think:
    Hooray for long comments!
    :cute:
    and yeah, I didn't want that first moment to follow through like every other slash and have them rip each others clothes off and fuck on the table, y'know? It's more realistic for them to be shocked... I mean, this is his best friend since forever. He's gotta get used to that.

    and the title is from Mike's shirt. I always liked that shirt and the phrase kinda made me want to write, and I had a sentence form in my head that grew and grew into well, this story. Notice it's also at the end of the first chapter in the story (and I plan on it being the last sentence of this fic whenever/if ever I do finish it. :cute:)
    April 28th, 2009 at 09:15am
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    A lanky boy of about ten scanned the lunchroom for an appropriate table to sit, looking just as out of place as he felt. His blue eyes darting from table to table, group to group.
    Wow Young!Mike is so adorable. :arms:

    “I…I think I need you to stay. So I can tell him.”
    -can't help but giggle-
    This part is really tense (apart from my giggle fit.) It's really well done. I can really feel Mike's nervousness. And you dragged it on, which just made me feel even more nervous. :XD

    Billie nodded weakly and moved forward, hugging Mike softly.
    :cheese: I love how they're not all "LET'S MAKE OUT AND HAVE SEX NOWWW" straight away, how they actually talk and hug and whatnot before attacking each other's faces. :tehe:

    Mike’s eyes widened. “Y-You told Adrienne?”
    Oh my goodness, I gasped out loud.

    I love this story! :arms: Poor Billie.

    The MySpaces are pretty cool too. :file: Mike's is private? How rude of him. :tehe:

    Also, where did you get the title from? Because I've seen Mike wearing a shirt with that on it. :think:
    April 28th, 2009 at 06:52am
  • Billie Joe Armstrong

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    Awls... I just keep making you cry, huh?
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    I need to write something so I'll try... I think I might be almost done the next chappy actually. lol
    February 23rd, 2009 at 03:27am
  • Billie J. Armstrong

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    Though you haven't update in a while, I still think you should continue. This story is so good, it made me cry when Adie and Billie fought.
    February 22nd, 2009 at 10:34am
  • Billie Joe Armstrong

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    Slap Happy Bullet:
    i always feel terrible when a perfectly wonderful relationship turns bad in the fiction world. i have an overactive imagination, so the images connected to what i read can come off quite strong. i just feel terrible.

    bbbuuuuttt
    i like that you mention it's an end, that there is some sort of closure to the relationship and that part of his life.
    i can't wait for updates.

    i would really really really really really really really love it if you finished is it temptation or is it love. i know it's not quite your thing anymore, but you have no idea how much i would appreciate it.
    i LOVE this story.
    Yeah, Temptation is pretty hard for me to work on but you never know...I might MIGHT try and finish it. lol.

    I'm glad you liked it. =] Next chappy is coming up soon.
    October 23rd, 2008 at 04:27am
  • Slap Happy Bullet

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    i always feel terrible when a perfectly wonderful relationship turns bad in the fiction world. i have an overactive imagination, so the images connected to what i read can come off quite strong. i just feel terrible.

    bbbuuuuttt
    i like that you mention it's an end, that there is some sort of closure to the relationship and that part of his life.
    i can't wait for updates.

    i would really really really really really really really love it if you finished is it temptation or is it love. i know it's not quite your thing anymore, but you have no idea how much i would appreciate it.
    i LOVE this story.
    October 23rd, 2008 at 02:39am
  • Billie Joe Armstrong

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    A new chapter, yays!! :D
    I thought this story was dead...
    Great, as always, and I'm going to sit here and wait until there's another chapter! (so you better hurry up, or I'll starve to death)
    :P
    Well that's no good. *runs off to try and finish writing*
    September 20th, 2008 at 07:36pm
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    A new chapter, yays!! :D
    I thought this story was dead...
    Great, as always, and I'm going to sit here and wait until there's another chapter! (so you better hurry up, or I'll starve to death)
    :P
    September 20th, 2008 at 02:51pm
  • Billie Joe Armstrong

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    Slappy J. Minnelli:
    D: Poor Billie :[
    I know. Hopefully the next chapter will be easier to write, haha. I got started on it, about halfway through and I really wanna get back to writing quicker.
    -Ash
    September 20th, 2008 at 07:21am
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    D: Poor Billie :[
    September 20th, 2008 at 06:01am
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    UPDATE!
    hehe. sorry, sorry. I'm in the middle of an update for one of my new stories. It's flowing good and I don't wanna mess that up. Swear I'll try and get on this again, Kristina.
    May 9th, 2008 at 02:53am
  • Slap Happy Bullet

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    nudge-nudge
    UPDATE!
    May 8th, 2008 at 11:20pm
  • Billie Joe Armstrong

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    ohh damn.
    brittney is always a hardcore bitch and you make me hate her more and more. and when i think of her name tattooed on mike forever, i get sad.
    as for your writing, amazing as usual. you didn't go over the top on how depressed the both of them should be. you wrote what was completely neccessary to get the point acrossed, and i loved it in a fucked up sort of way.
    will adie and billie ever find a way to talk to each other?
    i love this story and i want to see many many updates, even though it takes me forever to read them. you know i love your writing, so i really hope you keep up with this story, unlike some of your other gems. *cough*temptation*cough*
    XD I'm sorry...really truly am that I havent updated Temptation in...MONTHS.
    Blame Torchwood. I'm too obsessed with it to think of anything else. lol.
    But I swear once this season is over (Friday) I will try and get back into writing some of my fics. I need to.
    April 2nd, 2008 at 02:55am
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    ohh damn.
    brittney is always a hardcore bitch and you make me hate her more and more. and when i think of her name tattooed on mike forever, i get sad.
    as for your writing, amazing as usual. you didn't go over the top on how depressed the both of them should be. you wrote what was completely neccessary to get the point acrossed, and i loved it in a fucked up sort of way.
    will adie and billie ever find a way to talk to each other?
    i love this story and i want to see many many updates, even though it takes me forever to read them. you know i love your writing, so i really hope you keep up with this story, unlike some of your other gems. *cough*temptation*cough*
    April 1st, 2008 at 02:02am
  • Billie Joe Armstrong

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    I am utterly in love with this story, I can't wait to see what's next, your a real awesome writer. So conflicting and passionate.LOVELY! Clap
    Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
    March 18th, 2008 at 11:32pm
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    I am utterly in love with this story, I can't wait to see what's next, your a real awesome writer. So conflicting and passionate.LOVELY! Clap
    March 18th, 2008 at 03:58am
  • Billie Joe Armstrong

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    Aww poor Billie :(
    But an all around great chapter, can't wait for more ^^
    More soonish.
    :mrgreen:
    March 14th, 2008 at 10:09pm
  • cat in dryer

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    Aww poor Billie :(
    But an all around great chapter, can't wait for more ^^
    March 14th, 2008 at 09:12pm