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  • ravenna

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    update. Now.... Please?
    October 19th, 2011 at 01:35am
  • X MCRMY X

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    AHHH! Must. Update. Soon!!
    Loved it!!
    August 16th, 2011 at 03:55am
  • JuicyLithium

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    Hey! I like this story, it's interesting. And I like your Gabe a lot. You Bill, too, but Gabe...huh, I just...
    he's kind of awesome, how he acts and is so self-confident. That sounds really Gabe-ish to me :D
    Also, the idea to let them work at a record store is cool. I can imagine Bill doing that and Gabe helping, while he's totally watching Bill out of the corner of his eyes the whole time :D
    Good job!
    July 26th, 2011 at 03:28pm
  • BMWbuttercup

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    This is pretty good!
    July 5th, 2011 at 01:45am
  • Kobra Kid!

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    I'm so glad your back! I kept re-reading this story over and over because it was so good! And the new chapter just adds to the greatness! Your an amazing writer>.<
    update soon?:D <3
    July 4th, 2011 at 12:04am
  • MissPunkRawk

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    I go from thinking gabe is a jerk to loving him again :/
    July 3rd, 2011 at 07:09pm
  • Marls.

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    Loved this!! Update soon(:
    July 3rd, 2011 at 09:01am
  • Alphadisaster

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    Great update. Worth the wait.
    Glad to have you back. :)
    I hope everything is going better for you.
    Can't wait for more.
    July 3rd, 2011 at 07:09am
  • s t a y y o u n g .

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    This was an amazing chapter (:
    July 3rd, 2011 at 02:07am
  • audrey.h

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    UPDATE. NOW. I'm in love.
    June 22nd, 2011 at 03:15am
  • Marls.

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    Love this! Update soon! :D
    May 28th, 2011 at 03:49am
  • Alphadisaster

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    I love this so much. :D
    Great update and I literally can't wait for more. :)
    Best Gabilliam story on here <3
    March 20th, 2011 at 08:58pm
  • MissPunkRawk

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    Love! Little Guillermo is so naive.
    March 20th, 2011 at 04:47pm
  • Frankie's Gee.

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    Oh wow gabe! What a horn dog lol, and poor bilvy! Letting gabe get him off and gabe just wanting to do the dirty, pssshhhh gabe will learn that william is not that easy i suppose *tehe* sexy updatte and anxiouse for more ;D
    March 20th, 2011 at 08:49am
  • thisxchicksxnotxokay

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    Damn gabe was pissing me off in this chapter. Haha. I still love him though. Even if he is an arrogant, sex driven, bastard ;) lol. Update again soon?
    March 20th, 2011 at 08:03am
  • s t a y y o u n g .

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    I have decided to comment on this.
    I must say I've been looking for a good Gabilliam for a while and I finally found one.
    Keep it up.
    March 20th, 2011 at 06:54am
  • whomever

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    william beckett is the only person who could make coming in their jeans adorable.
    March 20th, 2011 at 04:08am
  • isles and glaciers

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    D'aww :3 That was sweet and hot at the same time. ;D
    March 20th, 2011 at 03:24am
  • Frankie's Gee.

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    Oh lordy! I reallllllllyyyyy like this :D william needs to relax and let gabe molest him xD! I want, no, need more of this soon D: *subscribes*
    March 14th, 2011 at 08:16pm
  • Alphadisaster

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    Just stumbled across this and so happy I did. Can't wait for more. :D
    March 13th, 2011 at 10:52am
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