Afraid. - Comments

  • Kay, this was so sad, but so pretty at the same time.
    I felt bad for the mom the entire time, because I had a feeling something was going to go wrong.
    The way it started off seemed like something from a movie, and I liked how you described it and her devotion towards making the room.
    The end was the saddest part, because I finally got the title. It fit well, that's for sure.
    Great story!
    July 6th, 2010 at 10:53pm