These are just THE sweetest things ever, I like how you blended fact and fiction because it really gave depth to the characters. I believe in them and feel what they're feeling.
The only criticism I have is that there aren't any more of these haha! I'm a huge Billie/Adrienne fan so it's great to see another author on here appreciating them too!
I'm so sorry that I haven't commented because I was away for two weeks and we didn't have internet :( But oh my my this was really something! :o I absolutely loved it and all the research for this story! Now I can't wait for another chapter^^ Again I insist you to continue (:
Thank you. =] I'm actually having trouble thinking of what the next part should be about so yeah, any ideas would be helpful. Just PM me and I'll put it on the list.
The second part was beautifully written. I loved the detail and the overall feeling of the piece. Putting the focus on Adrienne and her family was a different way of looking at it, and you managed to capture it really well.
^Ironically, that's the one sentence I had the most trouble writing. I had it written in 3 sentences but they didn't sound right and looked like fragments, then I tried rewording it and that didn't make sense so I wrote it this way. I think so long as you read it slowly it works.