Snapshots of a Marriage - Comments

The real reason she had cut back classes, put in more hours at work and didn’t just pay for her own apartment with the extra cash instead of having to live back at home was that green eyed punk that she’d fallen deeply in love with
That feels a bit too long and kinda makes it feel like my mind will explode because it was just a lot of information jumbled into a paragraph and I had to re-read it to get the whole “green eyed punk” thing because originally I had thought the “green eyed punk” was another why reason as to why she was doing the things she does for whatever reason. But then it made sense.

Overall, I liked this chapter quite a bit, the imagery and word choice and everything is brilliant. I think the only complaint I have is that one thing I ranted on about above me. Other than that, chapter two was excellent (:

Thank you! =D

This was so freaking amazing! Your writing was flawless and I felt that the tone was perfect too. I also loved how real and genuine everything felt.

Overall, I really liked this and thought it was really really good! :D

Hee, thanks guys! =]
I'm glad all my obsessive research paid off.
I was worried this one was way too talky.

:D I loved it. It was really cute how Billie was all telling Adie's parents about how much he loved her and stuff.
It was just a really cute chapter. :3

Awhh. Beautiful once again.
I love your writing. Very unique :D
Keep it up!

It was so amazing, Ash! I loved it. It was so cute.

all that research did you good, I thought it was real.

it was amazing, I can't wait for your next update.

Thanks. :D
I'm working on the next update now so if it all works out it'll be up later today.

Absolutely beautiful.
Adrienne and Billie are a beautiful couple, and this chapter was absolutely brilliant.
I loved the dialogue you used between 80 and Billie! xD

I'm glad you liked it. =]
I'm planning the next one now and I should start writing it tomorrow (not in the mood for writing today).

Oh my lord thank you :o Thank you very very much for this amazing story and thanks for letting me know :)

I really loved this ^^ It was so sweet and adorable :) The language was so beautiful and the way you described everything... Just so beautiful :) Please please continue!

I write slash all the time. XD
But yes, thank you. :D
I'm thinking of what the next vignette should be. I have a few ideas but I can't choose.
An update should happen soon.

I really thought all of it was sweet, how he wanted to call her, how he missed being home so he could be with her.
I loved every word.
and thank you for writing a Billie Joe/Adrienne story and not a slash fic or a tennybopper one >.>

I really can't wait to read more of it. It was amazing.
You're such a great writer.

Aww, thanks Emilie.
I've gotta think of a new vignette to write.

ash... <3
this was beautiful.
so many emotions portrayed perfectly.
i really really look forward to more.

I love it! Keep it up(:

You'll get more! I'm really inspired with this.
And remember, anyone with ideas for more vignettes should PM me.

Dawls... I love homesick Billiekins. I want more of this... and other stuff... too...
I want more! XD

Love it!
This is a great idea. Keep writing more!

Thanks, guys. =]
I'm glad it seems people like it.