June 26th, 2012 at 02:21pm
To Make It Last - Comments
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i know im really late on this but i NEED you to finish this story! its the only Xavier Samuel story on here! please please please please!!!July 8th, 2011 at 04:03am
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<3April 17th, 2011 at 03:14am
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please, please, please update soon!
I ♥ your story soooo much!
sooo... please.. update.. :DFebruary 16th, 2011 at 04:45am -
I love your story, it would be even better if you added some emotion to the characters while in their situations. The straight out dialogue seems to much and you can't really tell what they are feeling. I hope you don't take this the wrong way, just my opinion. Other than that I can't wait for you to update. :)January 26th, 2011 at 03:54am
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please updateJanuary 22nd, 2011 at 12:29am
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Gets excited....* update pleaseDecember 31st, 2010 at 09:41am
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Baby names?!December 31st, 2010 at 08:25am
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lol "Why you no tell me?!" xDDecember 31st, 2010 at 08:03am
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Awwwh.... They needs to be together....
And you didn't subscribe to the killjoys story. -hint, hint-December 12th, 2010 at 07:05am -
Wait oh hell no what the hell thees no comments............ Fuck those people who have a disability to comment....November 7th, 2010 at 09:10am
Your layout is good and your writing style is OK but not very descriptive. You could do with spell and grammar check here and there as there's quite a few mis-spelled words. Overall you've done a good job
Oh, and Australia in July is actually winter and normally freezing as all get out so there's no way there would be a heat wave