To Make It Last - Comments

  • gothique4

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    I got sent here by comment swap and I don't know a lot about Xavier Samuel except than he looks like he's about 10 :p I haven't seen the latest Twilight yet (I know gasp lol).

    Your layout is good and your writing style is OK but not very descriptive. You could do with spell and grammar check here and there as there's quite a few mis-spelled words. Overall you've done a good job

    Oh, and Australia in July is actually winter and normally freezing as all get out so there's no way there would be a heat wave
    June 26th, 2012 at 02:21pm
  • StacieeLovesSWAG

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    i know im really late on this but i NEED you to finish this story! its the only Xavier Samuel story on here! please please please please!!!
    July 8th, 2011 at 04:03am
  • Guardianangel2534

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    <3
    April 17th, 2011 at 03:14am
  • dudeandduchess

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    please, please, please update soon!
    I ♥ your story soooo much!
    sooo... please.. update.. :D
    February 16th, 2011 at 04:45am
  • teenagedream91

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    I love your story, it would be even better if you added some emotion to the characters while in their situations. The straight out dialogue seems to much and you can't really tell what they are feeling. I hope you don't take this the wrong way, just my opinion. Other than that I can't wait for you to update. :)
    January 26th, 2011 at 03:54am
  • JackieElena

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    please update
    January 22nd, 2011 at 12:29am
  • Neon_Skies_Killjoy

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    Gets excited....* update please
    December 31st, 2010 at 09:41am
  • UnbreakMe;UnchainMe

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    Baby names?!
    December 31st, 2010 at 08:25am
  • UnbreakMe;UnchainMe

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    lol "Why you no tell me?!" xD
    December 31st, 2010 at 08:03am
  • Neon_Skies_Killjoy

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    Awwwh.... They needs to be together....

    And you didn't subscribe to the killjoys story. -hint, hint-
    December 12th, 2010 at 07:05am
  • Neon_Skies_Killjoy

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    Wait oh hell no what the hell thees no comments............ Fuck those people who have a disability to comment....
    November 7th, 2010 at 09:10am