Irrational Fears - Comments

That tree photo looks oddly familiar. X)
I'm so glad you wrote more, even if it wasn't a lot. *sighs* I should really write something now. You won't believe how unbelieveably busy I've been this week.

Oh, I was also going to mention how interesting it is that nobody is really content with their life. Crystal wants to be in the country, Gabe wants to be in the city. It's because they become used to it and have had enough time to find all the flaws.

It's been a while since I read anything by you. I had forgotten how poetic you can get with words. And don't worry about transitions. I didn't notice any problems, and I rarely use them myself (especially in my journal entries).
The whole time while reading this I was thinking something bad was going to happen. When she got a text from someone she didn't know I was thinking an axe murderer was going to find her. Then at the end when he kissed her and you wrote that she was "thrust into a make-believe world" I literally thought she was sucked into an alternate universe like Flutura. Haha, I'm too used to your usual literature.

First of all, I love the layout. It's so simple, yet beautiful. Second, I am already drawn to this. Your description was lovely and I look forward to what you have coming for this story. I'm subbing so update soon. =)