Hello :) Thank you so much for entering the contest. :)
First things first, great job. You captured you character and the song basically to the T. I really enjoyed reading the entire story. It seemed slightly choppy, almost like you wanted to add more, but it still captured the essence of the story and the challenge. I really like the characterization, especially with your main character. She was very relatable and the ending was priceless. I can definitely seeing Adam Gontier being exactly how you portrayed him, so great job. I love happy endings. There were a few typos but nothing that can't be overlooked, believe me I understand that they're annoying. Overall you did an amazing job. Good luck. :)
Thank you so much for entering the contest. :)
First things first, great job. You captured you character and the song basically to the T. I really enjoyed reading the entire story.
It seemed slightly choppy, almost like you wanted to add more, but it still captured the essence of the story and the challenge.
I really like the characterization, especially with your main character. She was very relatable and the ending was priceless. I can definitely seeing Adam Gontier being exactly how you portrayed him, so great job. I love happy endings.
There were a few typos but nothing that can't be overlooked, believe me I understand that they're annoying.
Overall you did an amazing job.
Good luck.
:)