Come to Me - Comments

There's no denying it, I am hooked.
Every chapter leaves me wanting more. You engage the reader so well. Jonah's world is so fascinating; his character completely three dimensional which demands the reader's attention and has one longing to further explore who he is as well as the fresh spin on his role in the universe. Death fascinates everyone and this story is so completely original each step of the way.

Your scene depicting Clarice's death definitely had me at the edge of my seat as your tone of writing suggested so many emotions without having to explain them. I may have said this before but I must repeat it; I adore this story. Your writing style is fantastic and I can't wait to read more.

I loved this, right from the beginning. It's engaging and inventive; I was hooked. The concept of the story is interesting, and your execution of it is very good as well. The descriptions used in the piece are beautiful and imaginative; they really bring it to life. There is a lovely sort of fantasy element to the story, a mythology surrounding it. You've taken an old idea and turned it into something completely your own, so to speak. Everyone is really just fascinated with death, and it makes for a good story.

I enjoy Clarice and Jonah's interactions; they seem like quite interesting characters. The layout is lovely as well. Very good job, and I hope to read more from you very soon. Keep at it, I can tell you have something special here.

What she said. ^

And you're an awesome author. :D

I absolutely adore this story. The vivid imagery you create with such beautiful writing style has me feeling like I am right there in Jonah’s head. It isn’t often one comes across a story so brilliantly written and I must say I feel it’s my lucky day for finding this. I envy your ability to throw your readers straight into the world you’ve created. It’s such a fresh spin on a usually clichéd role. I love this story and can’t get enough. I hope to read more chapters soon.

Hey! This is really really good! I subscribed, so you'd better keep going! x] I really don't see why anyone hasn't commented yet, because this story definately deserves comments. Hmph. *sigh* ah, well. It'll get better, no worries!! And keep writing this story!!!!!!! :]