I really thought this was good and I totally think you should continue it. You have a start of an awesome story.
I liked the flashback, and the new boy that can see her. Although, I'm kind of confused. Can Josh see her or not? I mean, I just scanned it again and it seems like he can see her, but at the end he doesn't seem to see what's going on with Mr. Tall, Dark and Handsome(: (well, maybe not so dark, but ya know.)
Anyway, I thought that this was interesting and I really liked it.
I really thought this was good and I totally think you should continue it. You have a start of an awesome story.
I liked the flashback, and the new boy that can see her. Although, I'm kind of confused. Can Josh see her or not? I mean, I just scanned it again and it seems like he can see her, but at the end he doesn't seem to see what's going on with Mr. Tall, Dark and Handsome(: (well, maybe not so dark, but ya know.)
Anyway, I thought that this was interesting and I really liked it.
Great job!