Little Black Sheep - Comments

Surreal Dreams (100)

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YAAY(:
Another update!!! I can NOT wait for the sequel!!

July 24th, 2010 at 01:47pm

Surreal Dreams (100)

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HOLY @(*##!@&~+!!! Where are all you're comments?!?! This is amazing! I can't believe you would take the time to write all that! Please write a sequel?!? I'm in love with your story!

July 22nd, 2010 at 10:47am

Green Raspberries. (100)

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Are you going to be writing a sequel . .. was that even the end? I think that you should skip the next couple of years and get right into the good stuff, when Emily is, like, 16.
I can't believe there aren't any comments yet!
Oh, and if you don't mind, could I make a suggestion. Maybe put a space between your dialouge and paragraphs. For example,
"Blah bla blah" Said Emily.

"Blah blah blah blah." Replied Harry.

Then they both lived happily ever after blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah.

Haha, I just think thats way easier on the readers eyes, plus it is a requirement on Mibba . . . .
I really do like the story.

July 18th, 2010 at 08:10pm