I know its been almost two years, but im fnally judging the contest! I loved how you used the picture and quote, it was perfect. Some aspects of the story confused me, like why people were upset at Sophie. I understand why Julia was, though I was a little confused that they were still friends. I would have liked to know what happend with Sam and Julia. There were also quite a few small spelling mistakes and left out words. But I loved the story you told and thought you did a great job.
I loved how you used the picture and quote, it was perfect.
Some aspects of the story confused me, like why people were upset at Sophie.
I understand why Julia was, though I was a little confused that they were still friends.
I would have liked to know what happend with Sam and Julia.
There were also quite a few small spelling mistakes and left out words.
But I loved the story you told and thought you did a great job.