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  • whatsarahsaid-

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    Thank you! And yeah, I was thinking about doing that. Thanks for the advice, I really appreciate it! <3
    July 22nd, 2010 at 04:38am
  • Schience Officer Fry

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    It's still really good. One thing, though: When another person starts talking, put it in a new paragraph. I hope that helps. (:
    July 22nd, 2010 at 12:21am
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    Oh, my... I'm really impressed with your writing skills and detail. I can't wait to see what happens next. (:

    I'm definitely subscribing. <3
    July 19th, 2010 at 06:38am
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