Lead Me To The Light - Comments

  • New Perspective.'

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    Love it! :D Write more! :3
    April 8th, 2011 at 01:31pm
  • JJonas_CQuiseng

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    Yay for an update :)
    I think it's Tara for some reason.
    Update super soon please!!
    January 2nd, 2011 at 04:32am
  • Natka

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    Tara's a bitch. Grrrr. I very much dislike her.
    Damn, I hope Alana toughens up.
    Ooooh, maybe she could hit her back!
    YES! Thatt would be totally awesome and epic and epic and really good!
    Yes, double Epic because I love Epic.
    Keep up the Epic-ness.
    (Yes, I know this story really doesn't fit the meaning of Epic, but Epic it such a cool word, I will twist it's meaning until it suits the story)
    November 23rd, 2010 at 07:21am
  • Natka

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    “Meow” my cat greeted me
    Freaking EPIC, that ^^^
    Okay, right. So, this is a lovely story. I can tell from the first 2 chapters. If it goes downhill from there, I am utterly clueless about it because I am so in love with this right now.
    It's amazing, really.
    And the layout... It's aweeeesome. Seriously. Awe-some.
    Lol, I'm a douche. Oh well.
    Keep writing! PleasE!!!!
    November 21st, 2010 at 09:23am
  • JJonas_CQuiseng

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    Good update :)
    I'm thinking Tara is being treated the way she did Alana.
    Update super soon please!!
    November 20th, 2010 at 03:08pm
  • mfaller

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    I like that the relationship between Vivian and Alana is really nicely done; like how slow it is. I wouldn't want the main character to run away from an abusive relationship, only to jump in the bed of another woman. I also like the back story between Alana and Tara. That being said, I think the abusive relationship feels a tad unrealistic-- the whole knife-cutting incident felt like a jump for the character and I didn't feel it worked. The reasons victims stay with their abusers is, besides that feeling of attachment and love for memories past, they are able to explain away every fight, saying that it was both person's fault. Perfect example of this-- Steven King's Cassie, and the relationship between Billy and his girlfriend.
    I have one more bone to pick-- Alana feels like a piece of cardboard. A very kind, pretty piece of cardboard, but she seems to sit around and giggle and blush and act like a sad little victim without having any depth of character. Why did she become a nurse, who were her parents, is she still a soccer jock? Adding things like this to her character will make her more well-rounded.
    An all in all good job, keep writing and being awesome.
    ~Meagan
    November 20th, 2010 at 07:12am
  • JJonas_CQuiseng

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    Super cute update :D
    Update super soon!
    October 21st, 2010 at 03:49am
  • taste my dream

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    Yay for updates! ♥
    I think this the sweetest chapter. I'm really happy things are finally looking up for them.
    October 20th, 2010 at 04:59am
  • JJonas_CQuiseng

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    Awesome update :D
    Update super soon please!
    October 18th, 2010 at 05:44am
  • iceyblues

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    this is sweet, plus my dogs called panda, so i just have to subscribe :D
    but yeah, I like this, please update? xo
    August 8th, 2010 at 04:59am
  • stary_night_blossoms

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    awww innit cute >.< Update soon =]=]
    July 30th, 2010 at 11:11am
  • JJonas_CQuiseng

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    Good update :^ D
    Can't wait to read more, so update soon please!
    - Katherine
    July 28th, 2010 at 06:17pm
  • stary_night_blossoms

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    s'well good :) Look forward to more soon :):)
    July 28th, 2010 at 02:02pm
  • ChanceD.

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    awesome story Vivian and Alana are so cute together, please update
    July 28th, 2010 at 07:07am
  • stary_night_blossoms

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    loooove thisss =]
    July 22nd, 2010 at 02:37am
  • TANDB

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    okay.Vi seriously needs to grab her own knife and show Tara a real psycho.
    July 20th, 2010 at 09:07pm
  • taste my dream

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    I feel so bad for Alana ): I really want things to work out for her....
    But this was a nice chapter! I'm glad Vivian got to comfort her for at least a little while. ♥
    July 20th, 2010 at 01:32pm
  • likeswimmingcircles

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    okay, there are some grammatical mistakes that you might want to look into
    (misuses, repetition, stuff like that), but it's still pretty cool.
    July 20th, 2010 at 07:12am
  • SkittlesRus

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    nice :D And just saying, but I HAVE that necklace O.o I wear it all the time so i'm kinda creeped out lol
    July 20th, 2010 at 02:57am
  • TANDB

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    this cool, a different version of spouse abuse. luv it. please update?
    July 20th, 2010 at 02:32am