Okay, you need to re-read this for typos and mistakes. There were quite a few in this one. Anyways, so Paul let his jealousy get to him. But doesn't he know that they are her best friends? He should have foreseen some of this. Plus if he takes it too far he might ruin some things. Well until zack owns up to his feelings for her. Hmm.. Idk. Lots of thoughts right now. Karma can be a bitch and so can fate be. Good chapter.
I didn't know I reminded you but it worked out :) Lol. I know they say Karma is a bitch and yeah it true but Fate is a whore and likes to fuck people. I think there is defininatly gonna be tension and issues in the love triangle but I can't wait to see how's she gonna find the balance between them. Since the guys are living there now she should try to get Cody a girlfriend so he can move on from her, they can remain friends, and she can be happy with Paul. Can't wait for more :D
I think I had an idea of that earlier but forgot again, because I wasn't very surprised. But it is a good chapter. I wonder how this love triangle is going to go. I'm hoping it won't be another bella situation or leah situation. Even though it can't be completely. But I'm thinking more in the disaster way of things. Hmm.. How's the writers block going now? Think you're getting your grow back? Just curious. Still a good chapter.
Just noticed that I had yet to comment on your story so.. I really like your story. I think it's interesting. one quetion thou, isn't it Forks and not Fork? just a side thought while I was reading. besides that I hope for more of your story soon. :)
love the story, please keep it up and update soon. paul and dawn make a cute couple, and maybe you can find a picture of the car she has? Update soon please!! XD