The beginning is very sad, mostly because you can already tell that by the end, something wrong is going to happen. I love how you wrote it as a simple day in the life as to introduce everyone and show how it is at home. The letter was very heartbreaking and along with the music, it was like a frozen moment in time. The fact that she wrote a letter for her little brother to read when he was prepared was really and truly a tear jerker. Continue writing, please.
July 26th, 2010 at 12:01am